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Lightning Flashes

Dreaming of hellfire and lightning flashes I awoke, sifting love from the ashes. And to my horror, I was on my own, my parents had left for places unknown. I was eight, yet this wasn't the first time that I was a victim of this cruel crime. For they'd abandon me for days on end with naught to eat and not a single friend. Hunger multiplied the pain in my heart as the truth threatened to tear me apart. And as anxieties and fears heightened, I became inconsolably frightened. Sinister shadows creep, and monsters roam when silence echoes in an empty home. And though they were gone, for many a night, no one checked to see if I was alright. I never understood what wrongs I'd done that they would choose to abandon their son. I'd prefer they had stabbed me with a knife than scared me for the rest of my life. (Rhyme) 6/12/2018

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Date: 6/25/2018 8:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this heartbreaking well-written poem. This happens more than we care to know. A good write and deserved win.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/26/2018 8:34:00 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/24/2018 5:39:00 AM
Back with ell deserved congrats on your win, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/24/2018 10:05:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/23/2018 8:32:00 PM
Congratulations ,Emile, on a great win.. a very heartfelt write your pen to make a great image. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/23/2018 9:46:00 PM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/12/2018 10:06:00 PM
Wow - that catches the reader's attention. Superbly penned, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/13/2018 7:44:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/12/2018 7:36:00 PM
Wow, Emile!! I sure hope this isn't a true story. Poor little kid! Well anyway, you certainly portrayed abandonment with empathy evoking great emotion and sympathy from the reader. I think you've got this contest in the bag!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/23/2018 9:51:00 PM
Thanks Carole, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/12/2018 9:10:00 AM
Emile, you have portrayed this extremely sad situation so beautifully So tearfully well done xxoo
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/12/2018 9:47:00 AM
Thanks so much Mike, I appreciate your thoughtful comments my friend, Emile.

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