He'Ll Be Comin' Round the Mountain

Through inclement conditions, to haul this load
En route to trek for Peace of Mind
A ton in weight rides winding roads-
An Everest of the Soul to climb...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Davis Avatar
December 20, 2013 at 4:59 PM
Chan my friend This is interesting and unique. I will help you climb and lesson the weight on your mind and soul Thanks for another honest and great comment on my Love Condition poem. Hugs and Love Sweet Pea
That Archaic Poet Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 8:03 AM
Thanks so much, hon <3
Morgan Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 2:18 AM
ha ha a different track to what i thought it was. . .
That Archaic Poet Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 6:30 PM
Yeah, took it in a different direction, for sure lol ;)
Mohammed Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 2:06 AM
Its difficult not to love your work. You're truly a gifted writer. Well done!
That Archaic Poet Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 6:30 PM
Thanks, Mustapha; I feel the same about you, my friend :)
Kithinji Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 4:42 PM
Let's climb it together, poet!
That Archaic Poet Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 6:31 PM
I appreciate that sentiment, Gerald :)
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