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Hell

if only heaven was so close. a mile or two at the most. there would be no war,there would be no pore. everything needed would be rigt in front of us. there would be no must. but life is about needing and sucseeing. it would eventull turn into hell. a place far down at the end of every well. dark and scary. dreadfull warry. thre is no exscape, for this place under a vampires cape

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/3/2010 6:37:00 AM
I really liked this poem, a few typos but still quite wonderful~~
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Date: 9/2/2010 9:35:00 PM
interesting write, very cool, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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