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Hell

probing cries, drowning inside a bondage fire-forged conjecture ceaseless Haiku written March 26, 2023

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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/7/2023 4:21:00 AM
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Interesting way to go with this one. The Bible says that it is a horrible place that is burning, and the fire dies not (or never dies). I would not want anyone to go there no matter how horrible a person they are, but some make that choice to go there. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/7/2023 6:14:00 AM
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Hi Sara, Many thanks for your insights. The Haiku wasn't popular, perhaps because of the concluding line. I left the posting as is, though often the NA tempts revision. Best wishes, Brian
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 5/20/2023 10:51:00 AM
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Love your Haiku. Nicely penned.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 5/20/2023 2:13:00 PM
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Thanks Joanna. The Haiku was an NA so I may tinker with it. Or do an add on. I appreciate your feedback. Brian
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/27/2023 7:48:00 AM
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Few words with much said. I hope I never see this place. Good Luck. I also did a Hell write. Have a great day/week......................
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/27/2023 9:00:00 AM
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Most kind of you to comment on my Hell haiku. Take care + continued fine writing. Cheers Brian
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/27/2023 4:33:00 AM
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- Woow - Luck in the contest, Brian -
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/27/2023 6:26:00 AM
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Thanks very much for your good luck message. Be well. Brian

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