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Hell-Hound Allows No Souls Out

Hell-Hound Allows No Souls Out Deep in the darkest pit, where anguished screams resound Evil thoughts feed the it, fanged , demonlike hell-hound No mercy for those so lost, only torture to pay the cost Gnawing on its victims with relish, the monster growls so hellish Desperate pleas never heard, too late for any praying word Looking in deeply is insane, here, mercy calls always in vain Dark shadows skirt about, hellhound allows no souls out Fear forces me to not see, that fate once was awaiting me Distant pits rumble much the same Death final victor in this hellish game Robert J. Lindley, 2-14-2015 note -- Edited and shortened poem from a very much longer write many decades ago.

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Date: 9/1/2015 8:19:00 AM
She stole my poem and reposted it here as her poem!!!! Robert J. Lindley 2/14/2015 http://www.poetrysoup.com/member_area/my_poems.aspx Hell-Hound Allows No Souls Out 443 comments 2/14/2015 ******* This thing--Gretchen Cruz at link below stole my poem reposted it here! http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poems_by_poet.aspx?ID=56415 04/01/2015 Hell hound 161 Blank verse ---------- This woman (while a member here) stole my poem here at the Soup while a member posting here at the Soup. Check the dates. And that poem I had written many decades ago! Had edited it to make it shorter to present here! What AUDACITY!!!!!!!!! 73.2.144.54
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Date: 9/8/2015 3:15:00 PM
I hope they take care of this soon, I think there is enough comments on your poem she posted there!!! People now know the truth!
Date: 2/15/2015 9:32:00 PM
Yikes! Scary, Robert, and not one I should read before bed...maybe I'll stay up for awhile. I'm a chicken...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/14/2015 10:22:00 PM
Excellent. well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tf
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