Helen's Rebirth
in a fog she stands -
frantic movements cross her palm. . .
the gloom is lifting
something cold flowing -
comprehension gushes forth. . .
she utters. . . wa ter
(based on last scene of "The Miracle
Worker" & inspired by Rick Parise's
haiku contest: "Flowing Water")
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