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Harry is heartbroken, his wonderful mother has died. He passes her heart shaped gold locket to her great granddaughter. She hugs him and places the heirloom around her neck. Contest H Pleiades Sponsored by Kim Merryman 02 18 17

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Date: 2/24/2017 8:21:00 PM
Such a touching write!
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Date: 2/24/2017 7:47:00 PM
A touching write, Jan...beautifully written. Big congrats to you! Hugs, Rhonda :)
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Date: 2/24/2017 2:43:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great poem in Pleiades H contest, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/24/2017 9:29:00 AM
Thanks Anne- Lise:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/23/2017 11:35:00 PM
Back to congratulate you Hugs Eve
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/24/2017 9:29:00 AM
Thanks Eve:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/23/2017 9:03:00 PM
Congrats JAN to win on this nice piece.Hugs
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/24/2017 9:28:00 AM
Thanks Anisha:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/23/2017 8:42:00 PM
I loved it! Congrats!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/24/2017 9:28:00 AM
Thanks Sushma:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/23/2017 7:43:00 PM
I remember this one and how much I liked it the first time, Jan. So well done. Congrats, sweetie. (what will your I be?)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/24/2017 9:28:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, i have no idea lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/23/2017 6:42:00 PM
Congrats on your win Jan...
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/24/2017 9:27:00 AM
Thanks Jospeh:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/23/2017 5:43:00 PM
Jan, this was such a touching piece and flowed smoothly. As I have just recently lost my mother I could easily place myself in the picture. Congrats on your 3rd place win! Blessings, Kim
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/23/2017 5:58:00 PM
It is quite an emotional poem Kim thanks for my place in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/22/2017 5:15:00 PM
This is lovely. I treasure all my heirlooms with love and pride. Good luck with the contest
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/22/2017 5:24:00 PM
Thanks Lisa:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/20/2017 9:21:00 PM
Nicely penned Jan...GL in the contest...
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/22/2017 5:24:00 PM
Thanks Jospeh:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/20/2017 1:29:00 PM
oh, nice great flow nice subject... good luck in the contest Hugs eve
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/20/2017 1:30:00 PM
Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/20/2017 9:33:00 AM
Great take on the contest "H" Jan!~G/L in the contest! hugs~Che xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/20/2017 11:12:00 AM
Thanks Cheryl I found this quite a challenge using H:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/19/2017 7:37:00 PM
very nicely done, my friend!! Good use of the H words you chose.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/20/2017 4:18:00 AM
I found this one quite a challenge!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/19/2017 2:08:00 PM
You did well with this challenge, Jan. The topic is sad and touching. That heirloom is worth much more than the gold it's made of! // Hugs ~ paul
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/19/2017 2:45:00 PM
The contest with the H letter is quite a challenge Paul i hope Kim likes my poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/19/2017 1:44:00 PM
- Sharing the legacy with heart, not by greed - Great written, Jan :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/19/2017 1:47:00 PM
Oh this theme resonates with me so much Anne Lise!:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/18/2017 10:11:00 PM
Her hopes hung around her heavy Heart!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/19/2017 7:04:00 AM
HHHHHmmm I think you could enter the contest too your theme is HAG lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/18/2017 5:47:00 PM
Lovely sentiments Jan. I love reading of lockets for the nostalgic feel of a bygone era, this is beautiful.:-) my best to you in the contest :-) blessings, lynn
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/19/2017 7:01:00 AM
Thanks Lynn, I found it quite challenging using H as the first word and getting it to make sense. I did a couple of alterations after I had posted it but am now happy with the final poem:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/18/2017 11:28:00 AM
I'm sure the daughter will cherish it..
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/18/2017 11:35:00 AM
I've amended it to great grand daughter as I has 'his' twice as the first words and didn’t want to repeat any words. Hugs Jan xx