Heights of Everest

F orever dreaming of mountains
E verest towering them all
E ven in daydreams I picture
L ong legged eager strides as I climb
I mpressive trails that are winding
N owhere to go but up and up
G ear in hand steady for the trek

E very step a meditation inspired
V agrant cares parked at ground zero
E nduring dwindling oxygen 
R eality only a breath and courage

S erenity a state I believe of mind
O ften just slightly out of reach

T oday peace is on this mountain
A live and gloriously well
L oud is its chant as it echoes
L onging to soar Everest heights



AP: 2nd place 2021

Submitted on July 17, 2019 for contest ACROSTICALLY I STAND TALL sponsored by JAMES EDWARD LEE SR  -  RANKED 1ST
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Poteet Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 9:55 PM
Neat the way you worked EVER into your acrostic. Great read, a commendation on your 1st place win here, Line. Keep writing
Gauthier Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 6:14 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Reason.
Mcguire Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 11:03 PM
Congrats on this win!
Gauthier Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 7:58 AM
Thanks, Timothy.
Adams Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 8:33 PM
back to say Congrats on your top win :) hugs
Gauthier Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 9:56 PM
Thanks, Sandra. Much appreciated.
Adams Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 6:54 PM
I am afraid of heights so I will admire it from afar... your poem compares to its beauty! Good one Line :)
Gauthier Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 7:14 PM
LOL you're safe here, Sandra.
Proxenos Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 10:13 AM
Climbing Everest - scary thought for me but a challenge for others and I take my hat off to whoever reaches its summit and survives - a wonderful write my friend a great Acrostic, well penned. Kind regards, Jennifer.
Gauthier Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 12:30 PM
Thanks for surmounting your fear of heights and reading my poem, Jennifer. Most appreciated.
Romios Avatar
July 18, 2019 at 4:48 PM
This is a beauty and a winner! Panagiota
Mcgee Avatar
July 17, 2019 at 9:57 PM
I love what you said here. Good Luck in the contest!
Gauthier Avatar
July 17, 2019 at 9:59 PM
Thank you so much, Jeanne. Most appreciated.
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