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Heights of Everest

F orever dreaming of mountains E verest towering them all E ven in daydreams I picture L ong legged eager strides as I climb I mpressive trails that are winding N owhere to go but up and up G ear in hand steady for the trek E very step a meditation inspired V agrant cares parked at ground zero E nduring dwindling oxygen R eality only a breath and courage S erenity a state I believe of mind O ften just slightly out of reach T oday peace is on this mountain A live and gloriously well L oud is its chant as it echoes L onging to soar Everest heights AP: 2nd place 2021 Submitted on July 17, 2019 for contest ACROSTICALLY I STAND TALL sponsored by JAMES EDWARD LEE SR - RANKED 1ST

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Date: 8/7/2019 9:55:00 PM
Neat the way you worked EVER into your acrostic. Great read, a commendation on your 1st place win here, Line. Keep writing
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Date: 8/8/2019 6:14:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Reason.
Date: 8/6/2019 11:03:00 PM
Congrats on this win!
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Date: 8/7/2019 7:58:00 AM
Thanks, Timothy.
Date: 8/6/2019 8:33:00 PM
back to say Congrats on your top win :) hugs
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Date: 8/6/2019 9:56:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra. Much appreciated.
Date: 7/19/2019 6:54:00 PM
I am afraid of heights so I will admire it from afar... your poem compares to its beauty! Good one Line :)
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Date: 7/19/2019 7:14:00 PM
LOL you're safe here, Sandra.
Date: 7/19/2019 10:13:00 AM
Climbing Everest - scary thought for me but a challenge for others and I take my hat off to whoever reaches its summit and survives - a wonderful write my friend a great Acrostic, well penned. Kind regards, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/19/2019 12:30:00 PM
Thanks for surmounting your fear of heights and reading my poem, Jennifer. Most appreciated.
Date: 7/18/2019 4:48:00 PM
This is a beauty and a winner! Panagiota
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Date: 7/17/2019 9:57:00 PM
I love what you said here. Good Luck in the contest!
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Date: 7/17/2019 9:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jeanne. Most appreciated.

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