Heel Toe - Heel Toe

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The imaginings for this poem came to me during my daily walk in a park.  I was feeling happy to be alive and part of the community of people experiencing nature and the joy that comes with feeling your body move in the fresh air.  At the end, as always, it is good to be home again.  But it's with the knowledge that tomorrow is a new beginning.  I am (we are) part of life's cycle.

Heel toe, heel toe
Joyfully I follow my muse
Sole slapping shiny black path
Heel toe, heel toe
I bounce on foot's ball
As the air wings below 

Heel toe, heel toe
My arms stretch outward
Water bottle raised 
Like a totem to the gods
I press my bulk
Into white space

Heel toe, heel toe
Woman at tai chi
Slap, slap. slapping 
Shoulders, arms, thighs, 
Exuding the confidence 
Of her ancestors
I return her smile

Heel toe, heel toe
Child screaming, giggling 
Daddy you got me
Feet lift, lift, lifting
Generations
Of parental care and pride
I say a silent prayer

Heel toe, heel toe
Lovers on bikes
Pedals circle, circle, circling
Embracing the space between
Up and down
Around and around
I stride mindfully

Until…
I hear
Spirit’s siren whisper
Time to return, return, return
Heel toe, heel toe, heel…
Water bottle hangs empty
I trudge clumsily, slowly

When…
Returned from journey’s beginnings
Deeply breathe, breathe, breathing
I step into the light
Of home’s grace
Thankful for beginnings and endings

September 9, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 6/17/2018 4:16:00 PM
I do not think I have read this poem of yours before tonight, Kathy...I have to say - that it is a very good one indeed! In fact it reminds me of one of my poems you kindly commented on; both your poem and that particular poem of mine are dealing with the same sort of abstracts: time, space, dimension...and their convoluted intermingling. A fascinating write!! All my very best wishes, Kathy. Your friend. :) john
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Kathleen Kroll
Date: 6/27/2018 5:10:00 PM
Thanks, John. I appreciate your stopping by. I have been writing but need to start posting again. Your words will motivate me..
Date: 10/31/2016 6:57:00 AM
Fun to read! You sound like you have a lot of energy :) Nice write. What contest was this for?
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Kathleen Kroll
Date: 11/9/2016 10:05:00 AM
Thanks, Rebecca! What a nice compliment! It was for Muse on the Loose.
Date: 10/7/2016 5:53:00 PM
Beautiful... Congratulations.
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Date: 9/13/2016 3:28:00 PM
I am really glad to see this one win. it's an excellently written free verse, Kathleen. congrats!!
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Kathleen Kroll
Date: 9/13/2016 3:33:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! I appreciate your following me. Kathy
Date: 9/12/2016 10:24:00 PM
Kathleen, just dropping by to say congratulations on your placement in the contest. This was a really fun read:)
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Kathleen Kroll
Date: 9/13/2016 9:31:00 AM
Thanks, Daniel. It's always great to have you drop by. It was fun to write. How are you these days? Kathy
Date: 9/12/2016 8:39:00 PM
Kathleen, your poem held me captivated. I especially loved your repeating words. This poem is a masterpiece I would have had at the top! Congratulations on your win my new friend. I hope you are feeling better soon. Blessings and Aloha, Connie : ) 7+
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Kathleen Kroll
Date: 9/12/2016 9:11:00 PM
Thanks so much, Connie. I appreciate your kind remarks... Resting today. Would be even better to be resting on your palm-lined shores. Aloha, Kathy
Date: 9/12/2016 2:18:00 PM
A7 for this excellent WINNING poem that makes me want to dance. Congrats, Kathleen! Janice
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Kathleen Kroll
Date: 9/12/2016 3:12:00 PM
Thanks, Janice! I saw your Survivors poem recently -- Excellent.
Date: 9/12/2016 10:18:00 AM
Kathleen, I really enjoyed this but especially the last stanza....congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Kathleen Kroll
Date: 9/12/2016 3:13:00 PM
Thanks, Laura!! Yes, home is the source of all our muses.
Date: 9/12/2016 9:38:00 AM
From baby steps to senior shuffle the beat goes on. I enjoyed this trip through life's dance class. Thanks for entering the contest.
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Kathleen Kroll
Date: 9/12/2016 3:14:00 PM
Thanks, John. Appreciate the chance to participate in your contest.
Date: 9/10/2016 2:10:00 AM
I liked the rhythm of your creative poem Kathleen! I was caught up in your "journey/walk" right away! Very good, 7 :)
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Kathleen Kroll
Date: 9/10/2016 11:32:00 AM
Thanks so much, Laura. Your comment means a lot since you do rhyme so well. It's something that I'd like to develop further. Have a great day! Kathy
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