Heedless

Heedless …

The nightingale is calling you to wake up.
Get up morning has passed; lot is to make up.
If you look at a mirror, what does mirror say?
Another night has passed, is time to shake up.

I am filled with water and a lot of dirt,
To me, this water and dirt cause great hurt.
Unless I go and ask what is going on?
How come I am the dirt that now is alert?

This ocean that the life came from was just mud.
The mud turned into life and then to some bud.
The time has passed, suddenly, there was a man;
He was so cruel he made red wine red as blood.

There was a droplet of water that was free.
It turned to a river, then turned to a sea.
The water saw the sun turn into steam,
It turned into a cloud, then rain, and then me.

3/19/17 Haloo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 11/27/2019 5:51:00 PM
Very nice piece of art written here!!!! INK
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Date: 7/4/2017 9:10:00 AM
Oh my goodness! This is why I always miss your work when I stay away from this site for a while. Your choice of words and perfect blend of a cute message is beyond description. This is definitely good..
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/4/2017 11:24:00 AM
Thanks Funom... You are always so kind to me.
Date: 4/4/2017 5:59:00 PM
You are such an artist. Multi-talented. Wish I could illustrate my poetry. I just go get corny images from google! I enjoyed the symbolism in your poem.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/4/2017 6:48:00 PM
Thanks Madam, you are too kind....
Date: 3/27/2017 7:52:00 AM
Fabulous painting, and the interplay with the words only reinforces your message. Nicely done.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/28/2017 11:14:00 AM
Thank you Scott.... How many years you stay on 37?...LOL
Date: 3/22/2017 8:36:00 AM
I always loved a bit of spiritual-philosophy mingled with the visual arts; your self expression is transcending and rooted in cosmic consciousness. Thanks for sharing Pashang and God bless(!):-)
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/22/2017 12:40:00 PM
Wow... you're too kind..Thank you
Date: 3/22/2017 12:34:00 AM
Your two art forms are inseparable, they compliment each other. Thank you for sharing them with me Pashang...
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/22/2017 12:41:00 PM
Thank you for kind words... I do appreciate ...
Date: 3/20/2017 6:38:00 PM
An interesting interpretation that the picture inspired in you, Pashang. Where did you see that acrylic?
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/21/2017 5:25:00 PM
The painting is also mine.. Thanks Andrea
Date: 3/19/2017 5:59:00 AM
And reading the whole thing we are in a glee ... you have written it so beautifully ...
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/19/2017 10:26:00 AM
Thank you my friend....Indeed life is...
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