Heed the Beacon

Nature's mines lurking
Obstacles speckle the mist
Cloaking splintered planks
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 11:00 AM
Congratulations Joe, on your well deserved win in the contest " What My Eyes See" sponsored by Annalise Brigham. Love, Carol
Ruebel Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 9:34 AM
Hello Joe, Congratulations on your win in the contest As Always, Shar
Freeman Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 4:07 PM
Beautiful job, Joe great to see you in the top ten, my friend, near the top! Congratulations on your worthy poems 7th place honored win! Agape, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 3:58 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Taylor Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 12:56 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Joe. Nice going. Ralph
Poet Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 11:41 AM
Beautiful write here Joe!Congrats on your well deserved win---kashinath
K. Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 8:27 AM
Another very unique take on the photo, this sure has a mysterious and dark feel-- congrats Joe :)
Sweetheart Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 7:33 AM
Congrats Joe on your wonderful win in the Haiku contest with another fabulous write my friend.. enjoy your top ten sweet success with luv..
Mannan Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 3:16 AM
beautiful Image.many warm congrats for this success.
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 11:24 PM
Congratulations on your win, Joe. I think I saw your name for another win today which I can't wait to go check out!
Johnson Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 9:53 PM
Very fine Joe. congratulations, Joyce
Haick Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 8:52 PM
Congratulations on your very fine 7th Place Win in my contest, Joe. And thanks for your support. Always, Annalise
La France Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 4:51 AM
An "exceptional" Haiku you have penned, best of luck in the contest~~
Onclaud Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 12:23 PM
a different take that is creative and solid, joe.. winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette
Dietrich Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 10:36 PM
wow, you saw it quite differently, Joe. A very interesting one. Good luck in the contest. And how nice you love the wonderful smell of lilacs. me too!
Poet Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 3:31 PM
Amazing write Joe!Goodluck in the contest----kashinath
Pettit Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 2:16 PM
If this is for the contest, then it looks like a formidable entry. Good luck with it, Joe.
Kendrick Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 1:43 PM
Enjoyed reading your work this afternoon..Glad that I chose this one among the few that I will be able to read today..Sara
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