Heavy Stone

Like a desert lily
Like February sunshine
Like an August rain
Like daisies in a pavement crack

Like a cat on your lap
Like a parent's compliment
Like a child's gratitude 
Like a smile on the subway

Like an oasis in the desert
Like regaining your sight
Like cancer in remission
Like a winning lottery ticket

Like a reconciled marriage
Like an armistice announcement 
Like a stay of execution
Like a rolled away stone 
  by an empty tomb
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Date: 4/30/2024 11:35:00 AM
I have missed your poems… your heart and soul and depth of consciousness dear John . Each line evokes imagery and such emotion . An exhale of gratitude revealed and a smile from my heart . Hoping you are well my friend. It’s been so long and I am happy to be here . Blessings always, Susan :)
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Date: 4/8/2024 3:39:00 AM
Like the Beatles once said- "It's so heavy" Heavy indeed, awesome poem, John. Hope all is well. Charlie
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Date: 4/5/2024 3:14:00 PM
This speaks of renewal and second chances, very appropriate for Easter and spring, always glad of a new poem from you! Makes me appreciate the little things so often taken for granted-
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Date: 4/2/2024 8:08:00 AM
Long time no read John but this was so worth the wait. Great to see you writing back at The Soup again.Your poems never disappoint. When all appears out of balance and teetering on the precipice, your positive words, here, remind us that there is so much good in the world too. The last two lines that, for me, reference faith, hope and belief provide comfort and contemplation in these very uncertain times. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 4/1/2024 7:56:00 PM
A great poem, John, like a fresh view:)
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Date: 3/30/2024 6:45:00 PM
Like a miracle.
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Date: 3/30/2024 6:45:00 PM
Beautiful and profound.
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