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Heavy Stone

Like a desert lily Like February sunshine Like an August rain Like daisies in a pavement crack Like a cat on your lap Like a parent's compliment Like a child's gratitude Like a smile on the subway Like an oasis in the desert Like regaining your sight Like cancer in remission Like a winning lottery ticket Like a reconciled marriage Like an armistice announcement Like a stay of execution Like a rolled away stone by an empty tomb

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Date: 4/30/2024 11:35:00 AM
I have missed your poems… your heart and soul and depth of consciousness dear John . Each line evokes imagery and such emotion . An exhale of gratitude revealed and a smile from my heart . Hoping you are well my friend. It’s been so long and I am happy to be here . Blessings always, Susan :)
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Date: 4/8/2024 3:39:00 AM
Like the Beatles once said- "It's so heavy" Heavy indeed, awesome poem, John. Hope all is well. Charlie
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Date: 4/5/2024 3:14:00 PM
This speaks of renewal and second chances, very appropriate for Easter and spring, always glad of a new poem from you! Makes me appreciate the little things so often taken for granted-
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Date: 4/2/2024 8:08:00 AM
Long time no read John but this was so worth the wait. Great to see you writing back at The Soup again.Your poems never disappoint. When all appears out of balance and teetering on the precipice, your positive words, here, remind us that there is so much good in the world too. The last two lines that, for me, reference faith, hope and belief provide comfort and contemplation in these very uncertain times. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 4/1/2024 7:56:00 PM
A great poem, John, like a fresh view:)
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Date: 3/30/2024 6:45:00 PM
Like a miracle.
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Date: 3/30/2024 6:45:00 PM
Beautiful and profound.

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