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heavy hoar's frost birdbath's thin ice.... five blossoms 'pon star magnolia

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Date: 1/9/2023 8:57:00 AM

Lovely picture created by your words, Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/9/2023 1:37:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. Your visit made my day. Sara

Date: 1/7/2023 9:38:00 PM

Magnolia flowers are so beautiful to look at. A fine haiku on winter season. Lovely haiku dear Sara....

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/8/2023 3:25:00 AM

Valsa, Thanks for the visit and kind review of my work. Sara

Date: 1/7/2023 12:49:00 PM

Great haiku, Sara. You conveyed a stunning scene of the bird ice bathing. Thanks for your comment and placement in your contest.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/7/2023 2:13:00 PM

Thanks for the kind review of my work, Lasaad. I appreciate the visit. Sara