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Heaven's Light One Night In a Haunted Manor

The gray clouds hovered heavy with cold rain, it was plain and it pained me; I have to run to an abandoned and boarded up spooky old manor. A whisper told me it was a kooky idea with my fate, but I couldn't complain. A flash of lightning illuminated, in disdain, the loomed manor. The windows were broken and boarded up. The door just slightly open, an invitation, daring me to go in. Feeling helpless, with a despairing shrug; I push the door open. At once, I knew I should not go in. The door creeks open and I step in. Whoosh! The wind invaded the manor through the door and broken boarded up windows; whirled around the wooden floor playing with the dust and leaves. It released a howling breath in the darkness, through the silent rooms of foul sin. A gray shade hover still in the air; appears then disappears. I gawk in disbelieve, superstitions, I never believed. What is that? My thought's fear, like the beat of a drum. A piercing whistle; Welcome home. Dark days come. With each swing of the clock’s pendulum, tick-tock and the flash of light, the piercing whistle get worse. Either I make it back out or I don't. With Heaven's light through the purge of rain and fear, morning arrives and sunlight pierce through. Like a bat of hell, I run out. Running all the way home to worrying arms. 1/5/2019

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Date: 1/25/2019 2:12:00 AM
Yes, I see I did read and enjoy. Oh, well, Eve - we'll just have to publish ours for profit! What else can we do? Much love ... CayCay
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Date: 1/21/2019 7:54:00 AM
I have compliments thru out this poem that entertained me. The story line was engrossing and the 4th stanza really laid on the chills. This story telling is a good and worthy success; however, Eve, please read the rules - see if I read '24 line max.' Sometimes I get things wrong, if I didn't, you could easily revise this contender down to the limit. The best of luck ... CayCay
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Date: 1/8/2019 8:37:00 PM
Hi Eve, I am glad I finally dropped in on this piece. I hope it does well in the contest for you. IThis is a wonderful write that stirs such vivid visions within the mind. One can feel the fear perfectly. Those old haunted manors can sure start the chills to run. An excellent write my friend. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 1/5/2019 11:18:00 PM
Eve, I am so glad the censors did not ruin the words "bat out of hell" for you because to me this made the poem PERFECT. Good luck in the contest my friend! Nice one.
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/5/2019 11:25:00 PM
Thank you, Caren, I was hoping not, but then I just turned in my Limerick for Charles and it does have lust... wish me luck.

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