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Heaven's Guardian

A heaven's guardian angel dose plays The silk golden lyre's beauty and repose. Thine wet tears flow to sounds of heavens ways. It echoes pastorale music with praise; Docile strings tenderly, caressed on rows. A heaven's guardian angel dose plays. Engaging and entertaining saint braise; Chosen beacon over sunlit meadows. Thine wet tears flow to sounds of heavens ways. Speak of love, faith, hope inspiration blaze, Of divine spirit's lead; its wise heart knows. A heaven's guardian angel dose plays. Bound to love beneath darken daunting rays And withering beauteous fragrant rose. Thine wet tears flow to sounds of heavens ways. Wayward wisp sounds and lights through nights and days. Dreams caught till dusk falls with dulcet repose. A heaven's guardian angel dose plays. Thine wet tears flow to sounds of heavens ways. 1/18/2020 Poetry Contest: Your Best 2019-2020 Villanelle Sponsored by: William Kekaula

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Date: 1/31/2020 12:04:00 PM
A super villanelle eve, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/29/2020 8:23:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this inspirational piece. God bless you.
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Date: 1/29/2020 6:05:00 PM
Eve, I enjoyed the heavenly language and biblical themes in this, and the longing inherent in thoughts about heaven. I like the line, "Dreams caught till dusk falls with dulcet repose". Congrats on your high placement ~ John
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Date: 1/29/2020 2:31:00 PM
Sweet welcoming words, very uplifting, loving your word choices Eve, my compliments on 4th place and thanks for your participation.
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Date: 1/19/2020 6:49:00 PM
Really lovely, Eve. So gentle yet woven with such powerful imagery! Congratulations my friend!
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Date: 1/19/2020 4:37:00 PM
This is a fabulous villanelle. Best of luck in William's contest, Eve.
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Date: 1/19/2020 3:38:00 PM
Lovely lines grace heaven's ways...
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Date: 1/19/2020 1:30:00 PM
You did this form very well...I felt the emotions in this one..
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