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Heaven's Fields

Here beneath this sacred earth Lies one truly twice my worth. Standing here, confronting death Whispering "I love you " beneath my breath. The world is now a colder place, For I cannot look upon your face. But in the Lord's appointed time Once more, you'll place your hand in mine. Then in heaven's fields, we shall roam. For eternity, will be our home. Entry for CONTEST 335 any form,any theme,max of 25 lines - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand. 21/9/2017

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Date: 9/22/2017 10:08:00 PM
So sweet! Congrats, Gary!
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Gary Smith
Date: 9/23/2017 5:24:00 AM
Thank you Kim :)
Date: 9/22/2017 4:06:00 PM
Beautiful, Gary. Congratulations on your win. ...Fran
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Date: 9/22/2017 4:06:00 PM
Thank you Fran :)
Date: 9/22/2017 2:10:00 PM
Sweet and beautiful, Gary. Congrats on your win. Janice
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Date: 9/22/2017 2:13:00 PM
Thank you Janice :)
Date: 9/22/2017 10:13:00 AM
Gary, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem!
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Date: 9/22/2017 10:16:00 AM
How kind, thank you Broken Wings :)
Date: 9/22/2017 9:58:00 AM
Beautiful hope filled poem, congrats on your win!
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Gary Smith
Date: 9/22/2017 10:06:00 AM
Thank you John :)
Date: 9/21/2017 9:31:00 AM
This is such a good poem. It is filled with sorrow, hope, peace and comfort etc all together. A favorite Gary :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 9/21/2017 9:37:00 AM
Thank you Heidi :)

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