Gary Smith Poet Couplet

Heaven's Fields

Here beneath this sacred earth
Lies one truly twice my worth.

Standing here, confronting death
Whispering "I love you " beneath my breath.

The world is now a colder place,
For I cannot look upon your face.

But in the Lord's appointed time
Once more, you'll place your hand in mine.

Then in heaven's fields, we shall roam.
For eternity, will be our home.





Entry for CONTEST 335 any form,any theme,max of 25 lines - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Brian Strand.
21/9/2017

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Kim Rodrigues September 22, 2017 at 10:08 PM So sweet! Congrats, Gary! Gary Smith September 23, 2017 at 5:24 AM Thank you Kim :)

Francis J Grasso September 22, 2017 at 4:06 PM Beautiful, Gary. Congratulations on your win. ...Fran Gary Smith September 22, 2017 at 4:06 PM Thank you Fran :)

Janice Canerdy September 22, 2017 at 2:10 PM Sweet and beautiful, Gary. Congrats on your win. Janice Gary Smith September 22, 2017 at 2:13 PM Thank you Janice :)

Constance La France September 22, 2017 at 10:13 AM Gary, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem! Gary Smith September 22, 2017 at 10:16 AM How kind, thank you Broken Wings :)

John Hamilton September 22, 2017 at 9:58 AM Beautiful hope filled poem, congrats on your win! Gary Smith September 22, 2017 at 10:06 AM Thank you John :)

Heidi Sands September 21, 2017 at 9:31 AM This is such a good poem. It is filled with sorrow, hope, peace and comfort etc all together. A favorite Gary :) Gary Smith September 21, 2017 at 9:37 AM Thank you Heidi :)