Heaven's Doorway

I have vanished into portals of eternal light.lifted by pulchritudinous beams of mighty wisdom.Granted a wind lifted seat,made with yellow light.A cloud lifted palace, crowned by benign angels.With aggressively shimmering chips of gems ,stuck submissively and obedient  to their wings.Angels blowing a charmed horn, summoning the unknown. Before me, a carpet made of water and gold.A all powerful voice says,step forth.Come home.One of the few eternally blessed.Guardian angels with faces of light transported me beyond the invisible gates. I felt free.Free from burden. Free from pain. Free from breathing. Feeling whole and younger than before. I was taken for a tour,through heaven. Many were crowned with light. Many sat  on thrones. The floors was invisible. The atmosphere divine, with a sublime shine. Joyful sounds carried along the air, which I never inhaled. I looked at my chess and it shined with a mixture of hues. I was confused, resting my hand over this luminous light. Through my hand it still shined bright. In this palace there was no night. No fight. No blight. No freight. No malice in this holy. No envy. No greed. No negative bound entity's. All equally shining. Smiles are handed out more than food on earth. We are forever full here. No hunger in heaven.A place were people speak every language.More smiles adding to the ineffable decor. Amidst the almighty master we live forever more. Aloof I visualized my grandmother. She smiled at me. Her dress was maid of honeycomb and butterflies that still lived. She was crowned with lilies,rose peddles and electric. Her feet was  bare. She is sitting in a rocking chair. The last time she seen me, my face was full of tears,as I rubbed my nimble fingers on her pink tomb. She hovers from her rocking chair and said I am glad you could make it here. She says do you see how far prayer could get you. I said yes, I told you I would never forget you. Hugging my family members I never met on earth. Last but not least, I was hugged by my wife. We was bonded with eons of blinding light,enough to blind the humans sight. We are immortals drifting through sacred heavenly portals, reserved for married couples. We was surrounded by a red and pink mist, as she placed on my lips a heavenly and eternal kiss. Baby angels drew close playing the harp with holy tunes. A powerful voice said, love is heaven and heaven is in the two of you...enjoy eternal love....For you are eternally blessed......In heaven we drift.....

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Date: 5/30/2012 11:29:00 PM
Thank you all!!!GLAD YOU ALL ENJOYED!!!
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Date: 5/27/2012 5:30:00 PM
wow, what a TRIP that is. I really loved the part about your grandmother saying how far prayer will get you and how you mentioned ancestors not seen before, same as I did in my narration! You ended it well with the blessed union of your marriage. Awesome. (very Mormon like in that part of the theology!!)
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Date: 5/27/2012 8:43:00 AM
If this be heaven, I'm ready. There are many too many I must see. I love your poetry.
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Date: 5/24/2012 7:14:00 AM
Coingratulations on your win with this wonderful poem!------Lori
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Date: 5/23/2012 10:57:00 AM
What a lovely inspirational story/poem. Congrats on your placement in the contest.
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Date: 5/23/2012 5:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in P.D.'s "Long Poem" contest Elliott. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/22/2012 10:20:00 PM
Hi sweet Elliott, Congratulations with your awesome long long poem! Thank you for supporting my contest. Good night ~*~ALWAYS * the one and only :-) PD
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Date: 5/22/2012 8:28:00 PM
Hmm!Excellent piece,Elliott..Nice going..Congratulations on your win.....
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Date: 5/22/2012 3:49:00 PM
this is fa bulous Elliott!! it kept my attention from start to finish...i love it..CO GRATULATIONS on your wi n..big hug, love ya, deb
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Date: 5/22/2012 2:44:00 PM
Elliott congrats on your win..David
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Date: 5/21/2012 12:47:00 PM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this Monday afternoon Elliott. I wish you much inspiration that you may continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a wonderful fun loving week and keep the old pen flowing. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/21/2012 6:12:00 AM
I'm speechless! This is completely beautiful from start to finish. The entire poem illuminated in love. So glad I took the time...Blessings and Love, Rhonda
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Date: 5/20/2012 11:16:00 PM
a sacramental passage into your soul, elliot... beautiful!...best wishes and hugggs!
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Date: 5/20/2012 7:24:00 PM
Splendid write here Elliott!!!!!
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