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We rise with ebb tide and flow. Into the darkness of the night sky. On the way, sincere nocturnal glow. Look for sound, breeze, and flux tie. Tussling to stay buoyant to get a cosmic way. Once we perceive the level, it'll no long clave. We halted prior to pursuing our pathway. Reaching the top of every incoming wave. Dark ocean spotted with the ritzy shore. With its own peculiar set of needs and goals. Like a boat was departing the harbor. Vex me lost and later alone with my tolls. On this endless night, a timeless dream. Looking for a port and the earliest beam.
Written: July 14, 2022

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Date: 7/16/2022 8:16:00 AM
Always looking for the light in life, I enjoyed the read my friend. Bill
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Date: 7/15/2022 5:48:00 AM
Enjoyed the voice of your poem, Lasaad. Lovely poem you wrote.
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Date: 7/15/2022 1:16:00 AM
We all have ups and owns. Just keep steady.
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Date: 7/14/2022 9:49:00 PM
"On this endless night, a timeless dream. Looking for a port and the earliest beam." Life is a perilous voyage through rough seas.... ! What we are searching for is a port to alight and beams of light to guide in the dark... ! Beautifully expressed!
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