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Heavenly Night

Listen to the night reciting heavenly music When purple sky brightens with angelic spirits Mesmerized by the twilight's fabulous glory As the shining stars swing to celestial lyrics Streets are beaming in cherubic nightfall Stage has been set for the curtain call Romance is dancing in a rhythmic ball Happiness is reigning over one and all Watch the sun's orange glow deep in the river As clouds block the view of a lone photographer When wild horses frolic in open air theater Half-moon sketches arc to announce its arrival People are singing a melodious song Signs of melancholy have long gone Echo of joy reverberates the town For angels have joined to sing-along See emerald green dipping in reflective ocean As the moonlight shines upon supernal passion When the milky-way stirs up ardent emotions Watch the lighthouse rise-up to greet horizon No one wants to say goodbye tonight For revelers see the seraphic bright light As festive images dominate every sight Blessed by the presence of saintly might Hear heavenly night singing hymns of compassion As constellation bursts with flashes of excitement And the town meditates in ethereal devotion When cadence of the Holy echoes veneration December 12, 2017 Placed 1st: Strand Pick 4 Contest by Brian Strand Heavenly night Sponsor: Vermillion Scythe Placed 7th

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Date: 5/15/2022 1:55:00 AM
A heavenly night ! You have made us experience the beauty of this night of revelry and rhapsody through your rare gift as a poet, Vijay !
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Date: 4/10/2020 1:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a story you told in your poem. Have a wonderful day, weekend and Blessed Easter...............
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Date: 4/8/2020 1:05:00 PM
Per usual, Vijay, your imagery is stunning and I really like the pairing of heavenly blessing in the stars with the coming of night. Congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 1/5/2018 3:51:00 PM
Beautiful imagery. Congrats on your fine win, Vijay.
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Date: 1/1/2018 3:08:00 PM
A wonderful thing. You are on the winner list. BIG congrats to you, Vijay and happy New year day.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/2/2018 10:00:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. Happy New Year!
Date: 12/31/2017 11:25:00 PM
Congratulations, Vijay on your win with a vibrant and smoothly flowing lyric. Happy New Year.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/2/2018 10:00:00 AM
Thank you Subimal.
Date: 12/31/2017 11:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Vijay, wonderful write ! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/2/2018 9:59:00 AM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 12/16/2017 5:29:00 PM
Superb lyric poem, Vijay--paints a lovely, lively scene! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/18/2017 7:11:00 AM
Thank you Janice--appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/16/2017 10:08:00 AM
Vijay this is an amazing poem. Your words and rhyme are perfect and tell me of a place i wish i could go to.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/16/2017 1:45:00 PM
Thank you James--appreciate your comments my friend!
Date: 12/14/2017 8:31:00 PM
a lovely job you did, Vijay!! It's really cool how you did verses of monorhymes! good luck in the contest.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/15/2017 10:35:00 AM
Thank you Andrea--appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/14/2017 7:49:00 PM
Wow!! So very beautiful Vijay! I am lost in your poetic words tonight.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/15/2017 10:35:00 AM
Thank you Judy for such wonderful comments!
Date: 12/14/2017 5:21:00 PM
Wow, this is so good Vijay, in fact reads like a classical..love the flow and the melody.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/14/2017 5:41:00 PM
Thank you harry .. very happy to read your kind comments.
Date: 12/14/2017 3:40:00 PM
It would be like sitting inside a jewel with the one you love. Very enticing.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/14/2017 4:22:00 PM
Many thanks Patricia--enjoyed reading your comments.
Date: 12/14/2017 9:17:00 AM
Vijay...Your poetic light show blew me away!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/14/2017 9:20:00 AM
Thank you Chuck... appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/13/2017 8:10:00 PM
Beautiful imagery Vijay...Very nicely penned...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/14/2017 6:14:00 AM
Thank you Joseph.
Date: 12/13/2017 1:33:00 PM
- A wonderful poem described by beauty and passion, Vijay :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/13/2017 4:15:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise..appreciate your feedback.
Date: 12/13/2017 9:15:00 AM
Wow Vijay, what a magical pen you have.. no wonder you do so well in contests.. amazing imagery.. This poem flows so well and of course great rhymes...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/13/2017 1:15:00 PM
Thank you Silent One for such glowing feedback..appreciate your support.
Date: 12/13/2017 8:11:00 AM
Wonderful pen Vijay :) my best to you xomo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/13/2017 1:14:00 PM
Thank you Maureen.
Date: 12/13/2017 7:55:00 AM
A lovely heavenly night, Vijay...You've got that peace in your pen...All best my friend
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/13/2017 1:14:00 PM
Thank you Arturo..appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/13/2017 7:23:00 AM
Lovely images, Vijay, especially in verse 3 & 5! Enjoyed!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/13/2017 1:13:00 PM
Thank you Kim--appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/13/2017 2:19:00 AM
I am awed and handing you a big 'ole honkin' WOW. In poems there are often lines I love and there are often lines I wish I HAD written, in this poem there are both. All over the place kinda both. You charmed my poetic adrenaline, I leave high ... CayCay - what a poetic rush .
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/13/2017 1:12:00 PM
Thank you CayCay for such wonderful comments!
Date: 12/12/2017 10:59:00 PM
This certainly is one amazingly descriptive night. Beautifully penned.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/13/2017 1:12:00 PM
Many thanks Rhoda..appreciate your comments.

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