Heavenly Night

Listen to the night reciting heavenly music
When purple sky brightens with angelic spirits
Mesmerized by the twilight's fabulous glory
As the shining stars swing to celestial lyrics 

Streets are beaming in cherubic nightfall
Stage has been set for the curtain call
Romance is dancing in a rhythmic ball
Happiness is reigning over one and all

Watch the sun's orange glow deep in the river
As clouds block the view of a lone photographer
When wild horses frolic in open air theater
Half-moon sketches arc to announce its arrival

People are singing a melodious song
Signs of melancholy have long gone
Echo of joy reverberates the town
For angels have joined to sing-along

See emerald green dipping in reflective ocean
As the moonlight shines upon supernal passion
When the milky-way stirs up ardent emotions
Watch the lighthouse rise-up to greet horizon

No one wants to say goodbye tonight
For revelers see the seraphic bright light
As festive images dominate every sight
Blessed by the presence of saintly might

Hear heavenly night singing hymns of compassion 
As constellation bursts with flashes of excitement
And the town meditates in ethereal devotion
When cadence of the Holy echoes veneration

December 12, 2017
Placed 1st: Strand Pick 4 Contest by Brian Strand
Heavenly night
Sponsor: Vermillion Scythe
Placed 7th
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George Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 1:55 AM
A heavenly night ! You have made us experience the beauty of this night of revelry and rhapsody through your rare gift as a poet, Vijay !
Goldsmith Avatar
April 10, 2020 at 1:04 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a story you told in your poem. Have a wonderful day, weekend and Blessed Easter...............
Kauffman Avatar
April 8, 2020 at 1:05 PM
Per usual, Vijay, your imagery is stunning and I really like the pairing of heavenly blessing in the stars with the coming of night. Congratulations on your first place win.
Gauthier Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 3:51 PM
Beautiful imagery. Congrats on your fine win, Vijay.
Dietrich Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 3:08 PM
A wonderful thing. You are on the winner list. BIG congrats to you, Vijay and happy New year day.
Pandit Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 10:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. Happy New Year!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 11:25 PM
Congratulations, Vijay on your win with a vibrant and smoothly flowing lyric. Happy New Year.
Pandit Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 10:00 AM
Thank you Subimal.
Roper Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 11:13 PM
Congratulations on your win, Vijay, wonderful write ! Hugs Eve ~`*
Pandit Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 9:59 AM
Thank you Eve.
Canerdy Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 5:29 PM
Superb lyric poem, Vijay--paints a lovely, lively scene! Janice
Pandit Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 7:11 AM
Thank you Janice--appreciate your comments.
Swartz Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 10:08 AM
Vijay this is an amazing poem. Your words and rhyme are perfect and tell me of a place i wish i could go to.
Pandit Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 1:45 PM
Thank you James--appreciate your comments my friend!
Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 8:31 PM
a lovely job you did, Vijay!! It's really cool how you did verses of monorhymes! good luck in the contest.
Pandit Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 10:35 AM
Thank you Andrea--appreciate your comments.
S     Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 7:49 PM
Wow!! So very beautiful Vijay! I am lost in your poetic words tonight.
Pandit Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 10:35 AM
Thank you Judy for such wonderful comments!
Horsman Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 5:21 PM
Wow, this is so good Vijay, in fact reads like a classical..love the flow and the melody.
Pandit Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 5:41 PM
Thank you harry .. very happy to read your kind comments.
Cresswell Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 3:40 PM
It would be like sitting inside a jewel with the one you love. Very enticing.
Pandit Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 4:22 PM
Many thanks Patricia--enjoyed reading your comments.
Melugin Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 9:17 AM
Vijay...Your poetic light show blew me away!
Pandit Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 9:20 AM
Thank you Chuck... appreciate your comments.
May Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 8:10 PM
Beautiful imagery Vijay...Very nicely penned...
Pandit Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 6:14 AM
Thank you Joseph.
Andresen Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 1:33 PM
- A wonderful poem described by beauty and passion, Vijay :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 4:15 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise..appreciate your feedback.
One Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 9:15 AM
Wow Vijay, what a magical pen you have.. no wonder you do so well in contests.. amazing imagery.. This poem flows so well and of course great rhymes...
Pandit Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 1:15 PM
Thank you Silent One for such glowing feedback..appreciate your support.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 8:11 AM
Wonderful pen Vijay :) my best to you xomo
Pandit Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 1:14 PM
Thank you Maureen.
Michael Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 7:55 AM
A lovely heavenly night, Vijay...You've got that peace in your pen...All best my friend
Pandit Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 1:14 PM
Thank you Arturo..appreciate your comments.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 7:23 AM
Lovely images, Vijay, especially in verse 3 & 5! Enjoyed!
Pandit Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 1:13 PM
Thank you Kim--appreciate your comments.
Godwin Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 2:19 AM
I am awed and handing you a big 'ole honkin' WOW. In poems there are often lines I love and there are often lines I wish I HAD written, in this poem there are both. All over the place kinda both. You charmed my poetic adrenaline, I leave high ... CayCay - what a poetic rush .
Pandit Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 1:12 PM
Thank you CayCay for such wonderful comments!
Tripp Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 10:59 PM
This certainly is one amazingly descriptive night. Beautifully penned.
Pandit Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 1:12 PM
Many thanks Rhoda..appreciate your comments.
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