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Heavenly Instrumental

Could it be, Dear God, you see me? Here I am, in Your melodious outside, where Your presence in night radiance does clearly, for me, most purely abide. It is the lack of human spun nuisance that allows me to absorb You here. I need Your love as from above Your awesome choir’s euphony brim rushes brush music tingles in a mingle with my soul to fresh renew it. Your love flows warm song to heal the numerous ways I am clueless. On earth’s floor, upon smooth grass, I lay me down, Father, and pray You play Your gospel bright purity, your angelic chords of Father-love-security, yes, please, Your instrumental softly comforting, peacefully rocking me. My Dear Father, as Your beloved child, I now give my plea to Your night that it might waltz arm in arm with Your lullaby, dance on high as twilight rapture music heals and soothes my cry with divinities repertoire. Your flirty wind chimes deep within me as its hymn flirts upon my skin. Your symphony of vague promise comes as wave notes again and again. As a concerto I cannot harness, shadows volley tempo with Your moon, clouds float an accompanying tune and instruments in Your orchestra build a crescendo of exciting energy wherein my burdens float upon wonderous angels who hold them inside their primal notes. Could I, Father, but lay here amidst Your comforting music, safe from bruise and pain, I would gladly surrender all I am to be a hold note in the gold sky of Your spirit-scored refrain. ... CayCay December 25, 2017

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Date: 12/28/2017 7:24:00 AM
Lovely write CayCay..filled with inspiration and prayer, adorned with lyrical words of inspiration..best for a win.
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 12/30/2017 9:23:00 AM
So glad you enjoyed my heavenly night, oh to lay there until sated! Thank you so much, Vijay. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 12/27/2017 1:04:00 AM
Oh man...it transcends beyond clouds. The holiness reflects my own utterance in prayer.
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 12/27/2017 8:04:00 PM
Jannie - I can't think of a better comment to find, love it. Thank you so much. Love ... CayCay
Date: 12/26/2017 8:42:00 PM
CayCay, love the imagery and very beautiful spiritual write. hugs eve
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 12/27/2017 8:04:00 PM
Thank you, Eve. A spiritual write at Christmas time - such a perfect contest theme for this time of year. It was a joy to write and it is a joy knowing you loved the imagery. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 12/25/2017 8:12:00 PM
Wow CayCay, every line of your poem is brimming with breathtaking beauty and wondrous pearls of imagery. It's divine, it's deep and it's a dazzling display of your poetic prowess and talent. Heavenly bliss, my lovely friend. Best wishes in the contest but it's already a winner with me!.. ~Susan
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 12/27/2017 8:02:00 PM
I am so glad you enjoyed the poem, Susan, and I can't help but love every single word you wrote. I thank you, thank you and thank you, I do. All the best to you, Sweet Lady ... CayCay
Date: 12/25/2017 7:36:00 PM
Wow, a song of love for Christ on the day we celebrate his blessed birth! This is magnificent CayCay! I wish you a very Merry Christmas to you and your family! : )
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 12/27/2017 8:01:00 PM
Thank you, my darlin'! I didn't think about the fact that my writing went with the date, pretty cool that! Love ya ... CayCay