Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

- Heavenly Hugs -

Unique is the discipline of love 
Understanding God's law
Faith holds supreme commander

Sometimes we have to fight 
our way through a concrete jungle
stone cold dreams nightmare evaluates 

Rocking the cradle unworthy desires 
no peace or rest for the wicked deeds
in order to find the answers to hopes prayer
 
Truth pointing us directions 
within our code of moral conduct 
which supports us in our voyage
 
In the walk of life chaos grips hearts consumed with hate 
Without faith our souls identity will become dust 
Needing hugs from heaven to survive 







A Collaborated Poem 19.11.2015
Anne-Lise Andresen, and Liam Mc Daid
(tercets unrymed)

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Jonna Gallano January 20, 2016 at 1:24 AM This so great Anne! :) -Jonna Anne-Lise Andresen January 20, 2016 at 3:05 AM - Many thanks for nice visit and great comments, Jonna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Curtis Johnson December 9, 2015 at 2:37 PM Thank you Anne. Indeed, without Heavenly Hug, we are hopelessly lost. Good work. Blessings. MC!. Anne-Lise Andresen December 9, 2015 at 2:41 PM - A pleasure to share with you, Curtis - Many thanks for nice visit and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Wilma Neels December 4, 2015 at 1:33 PM This is a lovely collaboration Anne Lise! Absolutely love it ;) have a good weekend! Hugs W Anne-Lise Andresen December 4, 2015 at 1:57 PM - Many thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - I wish you a peaceful and great weekend, Wilma - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Keith Bickerstaffe November 29, 2015 at 7:02 AM Faith is the answer Anne... you are right. A poem full of content that we would all do well to ponder. Well done! Keith Anne-Lise Andresen November 29, 2015 at 7:20 AM - "Sometimes we have to fight our way through a concrete jungle", Keith - Many thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Quincy Mac November 22, 2015 at 7:20 PM Nice piece of writing Anne, might have to read more of yours :) Aroha, Quincy Mac Anne-Lise Andresen November 23, 2015 at 5:55 AM - You are welcome :) - Thank you for this lovely comments Quincy Mac - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman November 22, 2015 at 1:11 PM Hello Dear Anne-Lise, Another great collaboration again from you and Liam. The last verse, "Needing hugs from heaven to survive," is a marvelous end point for this write -- and says it all!! "TR + FAV"!! Cheers and Best, Gary Anne-Lise Andresen November 22, 2015 at 1:28 PM - I knew you'd like this, dear Gary - Yes, we need "hugs" from heaven in 2015 - Thank you for beautiful words - especially glad that it was given room in your "golden fav. book" :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Red Barchettadrive November 22, 2015 at 1:33 AM You two are unstoppable! Great write Liam McDaid & Anne Lise Andresen Another awesome collaboration about the ultimate HUG which we all could use every day! Anne-Lise Andresen November 22, 2015 at 7:20 AM - Red, many thanks for nice visit and great comments :)- hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Horne November 21, 2015 at 3:54 PM you work very well together Anne-Lise Andresen November 22, 2015 at 7:19 AM - Thanks, Jack :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis November 21, 2015 at 2:54 PM Heavenly collaboration, heavenly poetic results! A seven to each, Anne-Lise and Liam! Anne-Lise Andresen November 21, 2015 at 3:06 PM - Many thanks for nice visit a 7 and lovely comments, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud November 21, 2015 at 10:27 AM have a heavenly saturday, anne..huggs Anne-Lise Andresen November 21, 2015 at 3:05 PM - You 2 :)

Rainbow Promise November 20, 2015 at 3:43 PM Great collaboration Anne Lise and Liam! Let 'Truth continue to point direction along your voyage.' RP. Anne-Lise Andresen November 21, 2015 at 3:04 PM - R.P., many thanks for nice visit and great comments :)- hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath November 20, 2015 at 10:26 AM A heart touching poem with beautiful message. Nice collaboration so for beautiful pen 7. Loved always my lovely lovely friend,bl Anne-Lise Andresen November 20, 2015 at 12:11 PM - Bl, many thanks for nice visit a 7 and great comments :)- hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet November 20, 2015 at 10:12 AM A touching and eloquent description of the human experience. Great work! Emile. Anne-Lise Andresen November 20, 2015 at 12:11 PM - Many thanks for nice visit and great comments, Emile :)- hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Boddie November 20, 2015 at 9:35 AM mankind has so many flaws....and unless we put sin on pause....doing our best to Obey His Laws....which is, of course, the Ultimate Cause....;) Anne-Lise Andresen November 20, 2015 at 12:10 PM - Eric, many thanks for nice visit and great comments :)- hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud November 20, 2015 at 8:58 AM the two of you can really make images combust, anne... this is enticing.. huggs this happy day! Anne-Lise Andresen November 20, 2015 at 12:10 PM - Many thanks for nice visit and great comments, Nette :)- hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 20, 2015 at 3:52 AM So true Anne Lise so true.. such a lovely poem u hv come up with dear!! Anne-Lise Andresen November 20, 2015 at 5:45 AM - Many thanks for nice visit and great comments, Dr. Upma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

David Meade November 19, 2015 at 6:58 PM Faith, love, hope -- now that is a group hug!! A powerful message . . . may we always find this hug in our deepest darkest nights. Anne-Lise Andresen November 20, 2015 at 5:44 AM - Many thanks for nice visit and great comments, David - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter November 19, 2015 at 5:56 PM Hi Anne- Lise n' Liam!A very beautiful, heavenly,captivating sweet love poem you've penned here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!Excellent piece!So very beautifully written.I enjoy it.Just outstanding!A very heavenly sweet most beautiful love piece to be held very close to my heart.I love it!Just awesome!Wonderful imagery!Just great! Fantastic collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Anne-Lise Andresen November 20, 2015 at 5:43 AM - Many thanks for nice visit a 7 and great comments, Dorian - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid November 19, 2015 at 5:33 PM truly golden you pen sang a very beautiful tune anne lise a pleasure writing this with you dear pal wishing you a blessed weekend Anne-Lise Andresen November 20, 2015 at 5:43 AM - Thank you for a beautiful poem, Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)