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Heavenly Harley

Brown red shiny grey trees twisting peeling upward into canopies of myriad pastel leaves waving over tightly clustered rusting house trailers A squeezed in deck with barbecue umbrella and third hand lamp stand the ever present plastic bucket upturned by packing crates for table A Harley rumbles gutturally behind a cute converted hearse Erotic plants, some in pots weed up to camouflage and hide tiny windows opened to the breeze Another day in paradise beside the ever flowing stream of traffic From key to sundrenched key

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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Date: 2/5/2009 6:09:00 PM
Donald - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/3/2009 10:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week, God Bless you and best wishes to you in your writing*Tyesha
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Date: 2/3/2009 4:18:00 PM
What a vivid picture this paints! I loved reading this. :) Congrats on getting featured this week, well-deserved! Blessings, Amy
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Date: 2/3/2009 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/3/2009 4:56:00 AM
Congratulations Donald, on "Heavenly Harley" being featured. I've heard rumors that there were other brands. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 2/1/2009 4:28:00 PM
I close my eyes and see a tough biker with a heart of a poet. How sexy and attractive :) Let roll down the Florida keys on the Harley! Congrats for being featured! Lova, iolanda
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Date: 2/1/2009 3:09:00 PM
The creative use of imagery makes for interesting reading in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured this week. Keep up the good writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 2/1/2009 2:18:00 PM
Heah Donald ... best write about a trailer park I've ever read ... smile and I'm thinking its in Florida ... do you want it to say "erotic" plants or "exotic" plants? Doesn't really matter, I guess ... LOL ... wonderful write here and a very well-deserved selection to be a feature of the week here at the Soup! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/1/2009 11:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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