Heavenly Dreaming

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Poetry/Free Verse/Heavenly Dreaming
Copyright Protected, ID 06-1551-460-02
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written June 02, 2023
For the Premiere contest, Dreaming
sponsor, Regina McIntosh

I was dreaming of you last night for our souls are entwined eternally and we were back at the art gallery where we met you standing there with your tattered backpack we stood together looking at a painting then, you spoke and looked at me with the bluest eyes and I was drowning in their ocean and your voice was like music I think in that moment I fell in love with you I dream of entering Heaven's gate to find you waiting oh, darling I will soon, till then watch me fly and soar we went for coffee and talked and talked a little place that became our favorite oh, the hours we spent there me reading you my poems and you listening with eyes closed and the walks, how we loved a long nature stroll in green lush forests and woodlands resting beside flowing, bubbly streams listening to the birds sing us a song and flowers dance and vines twine I dream of entering Heaven's gate to find you waiting oh, darling I will soon, till then watch me fly and soar oh, remember the lovely meadows we found I remember one where you asked me to marry you and I said yes, yes, yes what a sublime wedding we had I will always treasure those moments I dream of entering Heaven's gate to find you waiting oh, darling I will soon, till then watch me fly and soar but, sadness also entered our perfect life when we lost our baby boy to death we were so broken as we held each other I will never forget your deep love and then, the unspeakable happened I lost you, my forever beloved, my darling man God took your hand and cradles you in his love I dream of that dreamy forever realm with want to be with you for eternity with God and Jesus, my rocks and salvation I dream of entering Heaven's gate to find you waiting oh, darling I will soon, till then watch me fly and soar and I will grief you for a thousand years and more till my very last breath I keep all our beautiful memories close to my heart for when I am dreaming you come back to me I dream of entering Heaven's gate to find you waiting oh, darling I will soon, till then watch me fly and soar

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/23/2023 12:46:00 PM

Constance, congratulations on your win. Your grief is wrapped up in a cocoon of hope and dreams eternal. My heart aches with your pain but looks forward, like you, to heavenly reunions. Blessings my friend.

Constance La France
Date: 6/23/2023 5:05:00 PM

Sam, thank you so much for the congratulations and comment, blessings !

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/15/2023 2:27:00 AM

Just love this, lady. Beautiful like you. God bless you and Congrats,. Love, Gina

Constance La France
Date: 6/15/2023 12:08:00 PM

Gina, thank you so much for the contest and my wonderful placement and the compliment and congrats, blessings and love !

Jack Horne

Date: 6/11/2023 8:27:00 AM

love this beautiful, beautiful write, my friend. I hope you are feeling much better by now - so sorry I didn't know about your surgery earlier this time (would have sent you that 'get well' card - I found where Lynne tidied it to, LOL). Get well soon xx

Constance La France
Date: 6/12/2023 7:12:00 PM

Jack, thank you so much for the compliment, the surgery was a success, sadly though I have lost my close vision now, but can see perfectly the sky, flowers and trees and into the distance, so it is a small price to pay I suppose, nothing is ever perfect !

Valsa George

Date: 6/5/2023 1:54:00 AM

This moment of dreaming is the moment when you can enjoy his sweet company. In a way to be able to get lost in such dreams is indeed a blessing ! That's the only way we can connect with your dear ones departed. A very touching poem imbued with warm feelings and nostalgic longings. All the Best dear Constance!

Constance La France
Date: 6/5/2023 7:14:00 AM

Valsa, thank you so much for the lovely comment, yes, I keep his memory alive dreaming and with music, and in the knowledge that I will see him, feel him again in another realm !

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/2/2023 12:46:00 PM

Constance this is so beautiful, very moving too. A wonderful tribute to your lost love waiting for you in heaven above… Belle

Constance La France
Date: 6/3/2023 3:39:00 PM

Belle, thank you so much for the compliment, and lovely comment !