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Heavenly

LET ME NEVER stoop to disavowing the truth Neither “looking lovingly” askance at a hurtful lie NOR OF PEOPLE “sleeping soundly” from an anesthesia Called purposefully abetting, forgetting to evade the shiv Of justice wielded with forthright insight, you see, For without “judicial justness” it is clear our nation Cannot long endure, much less, I must confess, heal And continue to be the nation we laud as our country.
FOURTH PLACE WINNER Written September 6, 2022 Submitted to “The A’s Have It” Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May [End Word: HEAVENLY Alphabetical Order: LET ME NEVER and NOR OF PEOPLE Alliteration: “looking lovingly,” sleeping soundly,” and “judicial justness” Internal Rhymes: abetting/forgetting; forthright/insight; and less and confess.]

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Date: 10/6/2022 7:03:00 AM
Creative winning work. Way to go. Congratulations on being on the winners' list. Sara
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/6/2022 8:17:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sara. This was a rather difficult one to compose.
Date: 10/2/2022 5:26:00 AM
Nicely penned Milton, Congrats on your win
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/2/2022 8:40:00 AM
Thank you so much for the placement, Joseph. I really struggled with this one. It was a particularly difficult but excellent contest. I certainly want to congratulate your winners. It must have been really difficult to judge.
Date: 9/8/2022 2:51:00 AM
This is the part that confuses me "Called purposefully abetting," and also that it is okay to instigate and rile up and get away with it if you are the hillbilly king.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/8/2022 8:35:00 AM
That part still confuses me as well, Caren. I simply cannot understand it, at all.
Date: 9/7/2022 12:27:00 AM
So we’ll done, Milt. Too much like hard work for my liking. Good luck in the contest. Terry
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/7/2022 8:01:00 AM
It is, Terry. I worked on this for more time than I ever like to devote to a contest. It is difficult to juggle three or four requirements at the same time. My mind just doesn't work like that!
Date: 9/6/2022 10:53:00 PM
A wonderful message and theme you have shared here Milton. Thanks for sharing this great effort of yours. I read your comment to Jeff it took you a while to write.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/7/2022 8:02:00 AM
Yep, this was not easy, Michael. Not impossible, but took some time and effort.
Date: 9/6/2022 9:01:00 PM
Goodnesss, I can understand why that took a lot of thought to write, Milt Good Luck in contest. Take care. Shirley
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/7/2022 8:02:00 AM
Thanks so much, Shirley. Same to you.
Date: 9/6/2022 4:23:00 PM
Interesting form for this contest, Milt. Looks like you've got it figured out. A good message included. Bill
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/6/2022 6:49:00 PM
Believe it or not, Bill, I have worked ever since the contest was announced on this one. I believe it is the most difficult idea I have worked with.
Date: 9/6/2022 2:41:00 PM
I'm going to have to take a run at this form - it wasn't easy, didn't like my initial efforts. This is well written, Milt.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/6/2022 6:50:00 PM
As I told Bill, Jeff, I worked on this for many hours. It is not at all easy to do!

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