Heaven Sent - Tim Smith and Seren

Written by Tim Smith and Seren Roberts

Across the room I slowly walk 
Hips swaying, smile in place 
Sensually I use my body to talk 
Holding out my hands to touch his face 

Here she comes, walking my way 
Beauty and grace, with a smile in place 
Look at her swing, look at her sway 
Oh how I want to kiss that sweet face 

Gently I bring his face close to mine 
Looked into his eyes, desire written there 
Hungrily kiss his lips, they feel divine 
I stroke his neck, ruffling his hair 

She pulls me in, much to my surprise 
Aromatic perfume, she's heaven sent 
Glow to her face, twinkle in her eyes 
Her touches so sweet, I must be a gent 

Crooking my finger he follows at last 
I wait til his body is close to mine 
Slowly I turn, my heart beating fast 
Look on his face is saying all is fine. 

Following close when she calls to me 
Feelings so strong, feelings so right 
My heart beating fast, she sets me free 
Our heat steaming up, on this brisk night

Just goes to prove with a smile and a sway
A gal can entice a guy in a seductive way
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lamoureux Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 8:47 PM
That is true! Congratulations to you both.
Roberts Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 12:44 AM
Thanks Richard, from us both ...Seren
Yvonne Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 5:54 PM
Congratulations Tim and Seren on your win.
Roberts Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 12:45 AM
Thanks Maurice for your congrats....Seren and Tim
Allison Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 1:01 PM
many congrats Seren and Tim great collaboration congrats on your honourable mention:-) hugs jan xxx
Allison Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 3:12 AM
He is a joy to work with Seren:-) hugs jan xx
Roberts Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 12:46 AM
Hi Jan, was a pleasure to work with Tim....Seren
Andresen Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 12:27 PM
- A kind word costs nothing and is still the most beautiful gift of all: Congratulations, Seren ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 12:36 PM
Just read this romantic poem on Tim's posts, so it was only fair that I visit yours as well, Seren! Compliments to both of you. You accomplished what you set out to do...seduction! // paul (a 7 rating)
Roberts Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 1:04 PM
Thank you Paul.....Seren
Dietrich Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 3:51 PM
Hey hey hey, it's poem of the day? that is really neat, so congratulations. This is nice collaborating . You guys complement each other very well, and you've got some great rhyme in it and the ending says it all!!
Roberts Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 7:33 PM
Hi Andrea thx for stopping by, was a fun write for us both.......Seren
Horstkotter Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 5:55 PM
Great poem. Congrats on the poem of the day.
Roberts Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 7:34 PM
Thx Matthew ...Seren
Andresen Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 1:08 PM
- Congratulations Serene & Tim on the poem of the day !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Roberts Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 4:28 PM
Thanks Anne Lise was a pleasure to work with Tim....Seren
Manassian Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 12:28 PM
Congrats on this sizzler you two....
Roberts Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 4:29 PM
Thank you so much Eileen....Seren
Allison Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 11:44 AM
congrats Tim and Seren wonderful to see this as poem of the day:-) hugs Jan xx
Roberts Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 4:30 PM
Was a lovely surprise,.... seren
Walker  Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 9:51 AM
Congratulations Serene and Tim on the poem of the day! Verlena
Roberts Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 4:30 PM
May I say thank you for the two of us....Seren
Jonas Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 9:16 AM
congratulations!!!! This is the most romantic poem I ever read!!
Smith Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 1:25 PM
Thank You Martha from both Seren and myself...hugs Tim
Mcdaid Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 2:12 AM
congratulations on poem of the day truly beautifully penned piece serene well done
Roberts Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 4:32 PM
Hi Liam was because of Tim it was so easy to write....thank you ....Seren
Yvonne Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 1:59 AM
!!!!CONGRATULATIONS!!!! On being the poem for the next 24hrs. I loved it the first time and I love it now.
Smith Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 1:24 PM
Thanks Maurice...It takes two people to replace you :)
Yvonne Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 11:38 PM
This poem is beautiful . The collaboration creates a sexual tension that might not otherwise exist.The other plus is since you are collaborating on the Internet and not actually together. You can take separate cold showers after the write. Great poem!
Roberts Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 11:56 PM
Lol Maurice only you could think of that......Seren
Vaso Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 10:33 PM
Oh My Thank you Tim, I warned you I looked good in a dress!!!!! Great write guys!
Roberts Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 11:55 PM
Thank you my friend for stopping by and commenting, made me smile......Seren
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 8:08 PM
I love it. I agree with Jan, it is so fantastic with the two perspectives. Brilliant work you two.
Roberts Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 10:31 PM
Thank you Brenda, Tim is a dream to work with, was so lucky he agreed to partner me.....Seren
Smith Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 8:44 PM
Thanks Brenda...Seren did all the hard work....I just enjoyed the ride.....hugs Tom
Chircop Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 5:56 PM
I am favouring this gem..Wow you two should collab more often..So so romantic!!
Smith Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 8:40 PM
Thanks Charma....Seren is brilliant and such a joy to write with...hugs Tim
Roberts Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 6:04 PM
Thank you Charmaine, we have done a collab before its in my poem list called Passion rises as Waterfalls....Seren
Allison Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 5:56 PM
oh women are very clever indeed! I love the way you have written this from a male and female perspective - Fabulous write my friends:-) hugs Jan xxx
Smith Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 8:42 PM
You two are trying to get on my nice list :) .....hugs Tim
Allison Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 6:01 PM
I agree Seren he is so easy to work with - Casarah should count herself so lucky - he is very generous in his praise too:-) hugs Jan xxx
Roberts Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 5:58 PM
Thanks Jan was a laugh todo....Tim is great to work with....Seren
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