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Heaven Sent

There was once an old girl called Flo On her death asked to go below. See, she had this trick, To try to convert old Nick, But he told her where to go!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/23/2012 3:40:00 PM
Good for old Nick. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 11/6/2010 9:28:00 PM
like this peace nice write
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Date: 10/17/2010 9:45:00 AM
right to h e double hockey stick lol great write that leaves endless smile thanks for sharing and for your kind comments yiur right about so many forms I was taught by another poet on this form and let me tell ya its a challenge keep up the great writing enjoyed the read also remember limericks go 99669 hope that helps
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Date: 10/13/2010 6:32:00 AM
Interesting one...Would that be hell for some to have someone following them around hell trying to convert them....I am glad that I chose this one to read this A.M..Enjoyed the kind comments on my work..I am glad that you got a laugh...I was hoping that it would bring a little mirth about a not so funny subject the subject of someone always pushing our buttons.....Sara
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Date: 10/10/2010 11:41:00 AM
like this one thank you for sharing [duncan]
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Date: 10/10/2010 7:55:00 AM
hahaha, who told her to go where, Sylvia? I will guess Satan told her she had to go to heaven!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/10/2010 6:37:00 AM
This one is very cute and uplifting and thanks for the comment on my poetry~~
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Date: 10/10/2010 5:15:00 AM
Nice one Sylvia, gave me a chuckle this Sunday afternoon >> James
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Date: 10/9/2010 5:42:00 PM
Funny Slyvia and cute for the reader .. if u enter in any contest good luck my friend.. its a joy to read tonight with luv..happy weekend..
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Date: 10/9/2010 5:41:00 PM
oops! Guess her plan didn't work out..take care~Deb
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Date: 10/9/2010 5:27:00 PM
I love Limericks. Shall I write my version of Flo? Check it out
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Date: 10/9/2010 4:26:00 PM
cute one June, much enjoyed
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Date: 10/9/2010 4:03:00 PM
Very humprous and witty write with thisLlMERICK
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