Heaven Sent

There was once an old girl called Flo
On her death asked to go below.
See, she had this trick,
To try to convert old Nick,
But he told her where to go!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Austin Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 3:40 PM
Good for old Nick. Congrats on the selection. daver
Chappell Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 9:28 PM
like this peace nice write
Stella Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 9:45 AM
right to h e double hockey stick lol great write that leaves endless smile thanks for sharing and for your kind comments yiur right about so many forms I was taught by another poet on this form and let me tell ya its a challenge keep up the great writing enjoyed the read also remember limericks go 99669 hope that helps
Kendrick Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 6:32 AM
Interesting one...Would that be hell for some to have someone following them around hell trying to convert them....I am glad that I chose this one to read this A.M..Enjoyed the kind comments on my work..I am glad that you got a laugh...I was hoping that it would bring a little mirth about a not so funny subject the subject of someone always pushing our buttons.....Sara
Chappell Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 11:41 AM
like this one thank you for sharing [duncan]
Dietrich Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 7:55 AM
hahaha, who told her to go where, Sylvia? I will guess Satan told her she had to go to heaven!! Luv, Andrea
La France Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 6:37 AM
This one is very cute and uplifting and thanks for the comment on my poetry~~
Fraser Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 5:15 AM
Nice one Sylvia, gave me a chuckle this Sunday afternoon >> James
Sweetheart Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 5:42 PM
Funny Slyvia and cute for the reader .. if u enter in any contest good luck my friend.. its a joy to read tonight with luv..happy weekend..
Wilson Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 5:41 PM
oops! Guess her plan didn't work out..take care~Deb
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 5:27 PM
I love Limericks. Shall I write my version of Flo? Check it out
Roberts Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 4:26 PM
cute one June, much enjoyed
Mehta Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 4:03 PM
Very humprous and witty write with thisLlMERICK
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