Heaven Sent

I'm standing on the platform, but I ain't waiting for a train
It's a spaceship I'm about to enter to take me to another plane
I'm going on a journey and I'll be gone for many a year
But the sights I view will marvel I, and quell all my fears

The countdown has reached it's prime as the boosters ignite the fuel
Blast off as I head to the heavens, escaping the atmosphere's cool
The tanks that have carried me here, are released to fall to the earth
There's no turning back I say to myself, this is a time to feel worth

The first thing I do when we orbit, is to view where I came from
Whatever I find, where ever I go, there will only be one place called home
Into the black void we travel, passing abandoned pieces of man
Redundantly left to roam, they have finished their part of his plan

We pass many particles of matter, forever strewn in this darkened world
Remnants of explosions from it's past, in ever travelling hurl
Bright lights appear all around, these plasma luminous balls
Held together by gravity, growing up they left us in enthralled

As we travel we become very wary, of the monster from this deep
Black Holes we are told many a time, from them nothing seeps
These regions of space lure, not even light can escape
Anything bright in it's presence, becomes inter planetary rape

But out in this uncharted territory lies a beautiful wonderful place
It's called the Milky Way Galaxy, it's where our Solar System is graced
If man ever decides to frequent, we have to leave many traits behind
For if there are others out here, we really have to be

A totally different, mankind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Eggins Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 5:17 AM
Smile ... loved this one James ... enjoyed the read love Jayne x x
Devonshire Avatar
September 30, 2010 at 2:18 PM
James, my cats were so lazy they would just sit and watch mice play! Thanks for reading my work today, dear friend. Love, Carolyn
Bulger Avatar
September 30, 2010 at 10:36 AM
interesting piece, an enjoyable read today. Cindy
Smalling Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 9:17 AM
Yes, commander, hope I get to thank you before you land or dock; you read and comment on my poem, exalting my humble stock, so on your return from space, O poet of extraodinary good imagination and taste, please drop by an old friend, and lets mix metaphors again
Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 12:02 PM
Great write...Have a wonderful trip or maybe will you move and take up residence there?.Sara
Neels Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 7:16 AM
I just love you title for this one, an exceptional write, you have taken me on a journey with this one James.. Hope your week is a splendid one :) Wilma
Henderson Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 10:39 PM
James, I really like "inter planetary rape", the way you used it. BTW soup mail. Charles
Haick Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 1:30 PM
Another exceptional piece of work, Highlander! Another for the winners' circle that's for sure, my friend..Definitely goes to my favs. today. Peace, love, Audrey
Devonshire Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 2:43 PM
Per your comment, what we really need to do is get rid of all political parties that are funded by special interests. Let everyone run as an independent and succeed or fail on their own merits. Love, Carolyn
Devonshire Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 2:27 PM
Mankind has a long way to go before we're prepared to commune with creatures of higher intelligence. I do believe they travel through Earth's skies wondering why our growth has been stunted. Hope you enter this in Barbara's contest! She'll love it too. Love, Carolyn
Locksley Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 1:52 PM
It's a chilling thought that man would not be welcome in other worlds, James. With our greed and ignorance, though, you are probably right. Other species are bound to be more evolved. Good luck in Barbara's contest and congrats again on your top place in the Sphinx Head on Mars contest. This is a great genre for you. Diane
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September 26, 2010 at 1:04 PM
Nice James, your poetry is far and beyond today. Very different, enjoyed,..p.d.
Roberts Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 11:41 AM
love it, good luck in the contest with this wonderful entry
Segal Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 11:39 AM
Wow! I love it, such a story teller! hows you my friend? and thank you for your lovely comments! love Simone
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