Heaven

Sweet dancing jasmine 
Scent upon air 
Breathing in beautiful 
In sweet aroma 
I catch 
a star 

In a gentle whisper 
I leave it 
Under the pillow 
Hoping within 
A wish 
Trailing 
in thoughts 

On a dark 
lonely night 
It will shine 
Outwardly 
to you 

Embracing emotions 
In deep 
dripping feelings 
On a blood moon 
Playing love's tune 
Crying 
in the chapel 

Floating river 
Of scarlet passion 
Dreaming in the clouds 
Destiny calls 
A princess 

From grains of love 
Building from the sands 
A castle within 
One staircase 
In the right 
Direction 

The world 
Becomes beautiful 
Wrapped around 
Only you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Koven Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 9:31 AM
Romance enthralls and delights. We seldom hear such beautiful emotions expressed by men. Well done!
Mcdaid Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 4:32 PM
thank you deeply for the very beautiful comment
Chircop Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 9:12 AM
The world becomes beautiful wrapped around only you-I so love this verse you penned..And i love the star you send within a wish on dark and lonely nights..So much comfort in such words.You dazzle my soul with beauty.
Mcdaid Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 3:02 PM
YOUR SOUL IS ALREADY VERY BEAUTIFUL LIKE SUNSHINE IT SMILES OUT IN TENDER WARMNESS WITHOUT A SHADOW YOU ARE MY FAVORITE THANK YOU DEARLY HEARTFELT
Chircop Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 9:13 AM
And its time to add the poet to my favs : )
Manassian Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 12:23 PM
Beautiful.....beautiful as always, Liam
Mcdaid Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 2:48 PM
AS IS YOUR AMAZING COMMENT EILEEN I THANK YOU DEEPLY GREATLY APPRECIATED
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