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Heaven

We learn to pray by praying. We can spend hours studying other people's experiences, but nothing is more vivid than an individual's prayer and its heavenly response. By Poet

                        The night sky was utterly dazzling with the stars' awry.
            Breeze clasps surreal trees and lifts solemn blights.
I could hear my name being shouted from on high.
With a stunning show of a billion-plus lights.                       
                        Whimsically roving soul in luxurious zenith oozing.
The rivers and oceans merge with the spire's fusing.
Heaven's waves strive to mix with seraphic infusing. 
      Should my essence not combine with the divine?
            The cliffs kiss the lofty sky, and the rivers shine.
                        No rose can be saved if it loathes its own whine.
A gilded, serene grace, adorns bliss and joy's way.
            There are no tears or pain, only timeless rapture sites. 
      Vast relics of divine life, still sing duets and musing.
            Heaven is an exalting golden sea of canticles on the line. 

1St place contest winner

Written: February 25, 2023

Writing Challenge -H Words - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

This poem form is the Fragmented Rhyme invented and Conceived by Constance La France. It has 14 lines with indentation, and a rhyme scheme, as follows: ABABCCCDDDABCD

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Speaks Volumes July 19, 2023 at 8:24 PM No wonder you won 1st with this beautiful poem. I am spending time looking at at some of your earlier poems on soup. They are breathtaking my friend

Constance La France March 2, 2023 at 12:41 AM Sotto, excellent writing and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - H Words, well done, I like your image chosen and your quote, and thank you for using my created form, blessings, Constance

Valsa George March 1, 2023 at 5:03 AM A celestial ambiance you have created, dear Lasaad ! Peace and bliss ooze out to replenish the soul. Lovely image too. Congratulations on your first place win.

Charles Messina February 28, 2023 at 6:38 PM Scripted beautifully, Lasaad. Congratulations on your top win! It's an honor to be at the top of the totem pole with a person of such talent... Keep writing, dear friend.

Paula Goldsmith February 28, 2023 at 12:46 PM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/quote/picture. I love it. Have a blessed day.............

Anne-Lise Andresen February 28, 2023 at 10:02 AM - Heavenly beautiful ... you describe it as paradise on earth, Las :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs

Ann Peck February 28, 2023 at 9:22 AM The images your poems give us, Lasaad-- for their beauty, thank you! Congratulations

Vijay Pandit February 26, 2023 at 5:53 AM Wonderfully descriptive write my friend. I like what you see through your imagination what heaven is like--exalting golden sea. Best to you, Lasaad.

Joanna Daniel February 26, 2023 at 5:05 AM Very well done, Sotto:)

Victor Buhagiar February 26, 2023 at 1:56 AM What a fine poem was written in Constance's scheme. You're a great poet.

Yann Rolland February 25, 2023 at 6:32 PM very beautiful, description of universe is awesome, thanks yann