Heaven - Pleiades

Heaven High above crests descry heralds angelic hosts. Hallelujahs sing to hallow lazuline skies, hailing from God's own breath. Harps strummed in perfect love - harmonies quench like rain. Written 2/19 17 for Pleiades H Contest

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/24/2017 8:05:00 PM

Congrats, Rhonda! Heavenly!

Sushma A. Singh

Date: 2/24/2017 7:49:00 PM

This is really beautiful. I missed reading it in the first go Heavenly piece on 'Heaven' Congrats!!

Janis Thompson

Date: 2/24/2017 4:12:00 PM

What a wonderful place you described so well. Congrats on a beautiful pleiades.

Laura Leiser

Date: 2/24/2017 11:52:00 AM

This is SO beautiful, Rhonda! Congrats :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/24/2017 8:29:00 AM

Congratulations Rhonda, heaven sent...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/24/2017 2:47:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great poem in Pleiades H contest, Rhonda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 2/24/2017 2:37:00 AM

I like harmonies quenching the rain and harps strummed in perfect love. Heaven on earth, Kai

Eve Roper

Date: 2/23/2017 11:31:00 PM

Back to congratulate you Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2017 7:34:00 PM

I think the imagery for your heaven poem is breathtaking. Congrats, Rhonda.

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/23/2017 5:24:00 PM

A heavenly theme, Rhonda! (Sorry, I couldn't resist!) I love the smooth flow of your lines and the poetic language. Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings, Kim