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Heaven-Like Giving (Santa At the Mall)

Heaven-like Giving Today is a day of joy. Santa shops for girls and boys, Finding the most perfect toy. Many elves are overworked. Toiling yearlong while time lurked. Hearing dreams with all ears perked. Sewing clothes and making clocks, Magic flowers, building blocks. All the while, the time tick tocks. Computer towers, name brand. Some instruments for the band… Karaoke, try your hand. Many shoes and mini-toys, Books about ‘Helen of Troy” Working elves creating joy. Day in, day out there's no frown. Cars and toys are pushed around. They make sure all flaws are found. Music that is heaven bound. Socks have fun sliding around. Magic sights would all astound. His lists are long. No, not small. Many gifts he'll have to haul. How will his elves make them all? It's too late to hire more. Fill this list? He'll need a score! Solution. Shop at the store!!! “Merry Christmas!” Rang his sound. Buy some gifts; help elves rebound. Heaven-like giving, love crowned. A Merry Christmas to Ya’ll (Southern Smiles) God's good will upon you fall Recall heaven's way. Love all. © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen November 27, 2009

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Date: 11/28/2009 6:03:00 PM
nicely penned, uplifting today!
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Date: 11/28/2009 10:08:00 AM
And we all luv u, Dane Ann, and this uplifting and flowing poetry on a Saturday driving home in snow is great too... thankxxx to God for laptops...I wonder which of your elves made it? enjoyed... invigorates the spirit for the holiday season... so close now... blessings ... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/28/2009 7:51:00 AM
Have a beautiful weekend and thank you for posting your awesome poetry here for us to read Dane Ann. Do you have the second book started yet? Love,Carol
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Date: 11/28/2009 6:14:00 AM
Dane Ann I bet Santa's got an extra gift for you for Christmas.He can't miss this lovely rhyme which I'm putting away to my favourites.Yes I am a painter! Mail your email id to : princefreakasso@gmail.com and I'll send images of my works across for your comments and critique,as you too are a painter.God Bless...PRINCE
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Date: 11/27/2009 5:39:00 PM
soup mail. jhl
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Date: 11/27/2009 5:31:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this piece of yours filled with Christmas cheer. The Holiday memories it brought back to me are ones I hold very dear. Great write Dane Ann and thank you very much for the links you sent me. Best Wishes Always, Bill
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Date: 11/27/2009 5:02:00 PM
Is it that time already? Wonderful poem. Never realized how much was goin up up there Thanks for sharing, Dane -Ann. - Robert - soup mail
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Date: 11/27/2009 2:09:00 PM
i love this beautiful spirited poem,its all you Dane,so very you,and you ve got soup response:)lol--Charma
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Date: 11/27/2009 1:21:00 PM
Oh my and I thought maybe Santa and his helpers could hibernate up there at the North Pole like the bears do. Resting up for the next trip. This is cute. Thank you for your comments on my poem. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/27/2009 12:52:00 PM
I love this poem Dane Ann...You're very talented...Enjoyed...Marty ... Oh and thanks for congrats on "My Dear"....
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