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Heave Me Back Home

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Heave Me Back Home He grasped the reins across the breadth of me, recrossed his arms to control the whip and me. My heart dares not stop, lest I be tangled in the mane. Dare naught to break the pace of hooves, now that we've passed the inn, and they, ...heave me back home. ***'Jamaica Inn' where shady and unscrupulous characters reside, and Mary Yellan, their neighbor whose suspicion grows... 2019 May 12 *1st Place* Free Verse or Rhyme Poetry ~~Eve Roper

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David Drowley
Date: 5/13/2019 6:15:00 AM
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'William, Congratulations on your win. Very nice western touch. David'
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/13/2019 10:41:00 AM
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Thanks a whole lot David!, Aloha wk
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2019 5:48:00 PM
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Nicely done! A cowboy poem! Congrats!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/12/2019 6:58:00 PM
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Why I thank you mam! Aloha wk
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/12/2019 3:25:00 PM
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I remember that incredible film, though in black and white it was so unforgettable! A very nice poem William. Congratulations! : )
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/12/2019 3:48:00 PM
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Laughton & O'Hara played it, yeah me too, and it's kind of you to say, Aloha on this hot Hilo weather, but nice! Aloha wk
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/12/2019 1:39:00 PM
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- Congratulations on your win :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/12/2019 1:46:00 PM
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Heartfelt thanks! Aloha wk
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/12/2019 11:52:00 AM
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Wow, William! Congrats on your first-place trophy prize with this wonderful poem! Keep write on! Best wishes, Gershon
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/12/2019 12:10:00 PM
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Thanks for the heads up Gershon, again, newbie here figuring out the nuances, GADZOOKS Batman!, Aloha wk

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