Heather

I knew a young lady named Heather She'd make love in all sorts of weather Out in the woods She'd share her goods With Tom Dick Harry and Trevor.

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Karen Jones

Date: 10/13/2024 4:29:00 AM

lol clever

John Read
Date: 10/13/2024 4:35:00 AM

Hi Karen who's clever me or Heather. Xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/10/2024 1:27:00 PM

CUTE one. I did one with the end line every tom, dick and harry!! but I think I worded it tom, harry and dick. heehee

John Read
Date: 10/11/2024 12:59:00 AM

Hi Andrea, what ever way round I'm sure Heather will be happy.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 10/9/2024 5:12:00 PM

John...a classic for sure. Meets all the qualities of tradition for this form! Well done.

John Read
Date: 10/10/2024 8:36:00 AM

Thank you Duke nice hearing from you.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/9/2024 12:06:00 PM

Heather was the keenest on Trevor - Maybe because he dressed in leather - O boy was he hot - The way that he trot - When he was in the all-together.….. Sis Beryl

John Read
Date: 10/9/2024 12:17:00 PM

Sister Beryl back with a bang, great comment thank you mam. Nice hearing from you sister Beryl.

Maria Williams

Date: 10/9/2024 2:27:00 AM

Heather must have been a 'hot one' lol and looks like she didn't worry about the weather either when she was enjoying herself. I guess she had protection? Lol. Maria

John Read
Date: 10/9/2024 8:48:00 AM

She did have a umbrella Maria lol.xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/8/2024 11:15:00 AM

Hello John Read, oh, i would think making love in the woods would be cold with whoever she is with. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/9/2024 10:30:00 AM

Hello John, Yes you are right, she does get warmed up John. xx

John Read
Date: 10/8/2024 11:54:00 AM

She'd soon get warmed up Darlene. Xx

Jan Allison

Date: 10/8/2024 10:48:00 AM

lol, what a co incidence John, I've got several poems about Heather in my next book lol - great minds think alike!:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2024 7:42:00 AM

I dont think so John they are a little too risque for soup and I get enough crap from some about my poetry so I am saving the poems for the book:-) hugs jan xx

John Read
Date: 10/8/2024 10:56:00 AM

Have you posted any Heather poem's on here Jan.