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Entry for the Nursery Rhymes Poetry Contest Image #3: Sponsored by: Eve Roper 

Young Heather found a feather one day in some cold weather; just there, right there, on the road landed, where the wind had blowed. “My wooly hat it’s plain and pink I’ll put the feather in, I think.” young Heather thought as she bent down; "It’ll turn my hat into a crown." A dove whose feather had mislaid, observed from window, as this maid, with feather, turned from awkward girl to princess, who would make heads swirl!

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Date: 8/30/2024 10:56:00 AM
Terry, this is a GREAT response to the prompt~~creative and entertaining. Janice
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Terry Miller
Date: 9/1/2024 1:32:00 PM
thank you Janice
Date: 8/28/2024 7:21:00 PM
a nice poetic fairy tale Terry
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Date: 8/29/2024 8:27:00 AM
Thank you David
Date: 8/28/2024 4:54:00 PM
Precious story line, so like the old nursery rhymes and Aesop's fables - clean and heart-warming unlike some of today's garbage on TV and YouTube. Thanks for sharing and congratulations, Terry.
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Date: 8/29/2024 8:27:00 AM
Thank you so much, a very kind comment
Date: 8/28/2024 9:21:00 AM
I really do admire you for this lovely nursery rhyme you’ve written Terry, so pleased to see you on the winners list…Beryl
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Date: 8/29/2024 8:28:00 AM
Thank you Beryl, you are too kind
Date: 8/24/2024 5:10:00 PM
A delightful nursery rhyme for the contest! I love this!
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/28/2024 6:35:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 8/24/2024 4:11:00 PM
A smashing entry for Eve’s contest, Terry. I reckon Eve will favour this. Good luck ;-)
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/28/2024 6:36:00 AM
Thank you Terry

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