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Heather.

I hope that when you get in that car You think of what you said to me How grateful you truly are And that you'd make it up to me. Well, here it is, more than a week No mail, no call, no texts. And all of this only because of A favor from your ex. I'm not asking you to love me. I'm not asking for that to end. All I want, is for you to be A true, genuine friend. It's sick that when she's not around, You can only reach out to me. Is she truly than unsound With her identity? I'm not saying it should be me But you deserve much better. 7 years, you still can't see. ANYTHING is better, than Heather.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/28/2008 2:32:00 PM
Awwwwwww!!!! Very powerful. . You should write me on My Soup Mail. .
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Date: 11/18/2008 5:22:00 PM
Brielle this is a heartfelt write. If you have experienced this it's great you have a friend like Sandy Schermerhorn to be there for you when you need a trusting soul to lift you up when things don't go so well. I pray your significant other realizes how special you are and how you should be appreciated and loved. Sandy is such a wonderful friend to have . You are blessed by her friendship. Read some of my poems on love and tell me what you think and hurry and write some more Please. Michael
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Date: 11/18/2008 4:06:00 PM
great write love it!!!!sad you have to live it to write it but still very well worded
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