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Heat of Summer

Summer's sun is scorching hot as it sends its fiery burn. Carnival laughter shakes the air when July takes its turn. July means more litter, as plastic bottles fill the street. The sand that was enjoyable, now burns the soles of feet. July brags that our sun made it the hottest month to name. That is, until sweet August brings its fire into the game. Then, August like a broiler spews an unrelenting heat. The green has withered from the lawns, now just the browns compete. At month's end, school starts, and family trip has been taken. But it's hot, and wishes for cooler nights is forsaken. Next comes modest September, whose flourish hides a sly smirk. Indian Summer in this month can be the sun's best work. There's hope for rain, sometimes it comes, but sometimes it comes not. Though through September's flimsy veil, the weather remains hot. And then along comes October, a time of leaves and rakes. Suddenly, the heat ends, when October applies the brakes.

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Date: 7/2/2024 10:46:00 AM
Wonderful rhyme.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 7/3/2024 6:48:00 PM
Thank you. I usually rhyme because it prompts my mind.
Date: 7/1/2024 11:46:00 AM
Nice poem on summer's heat. It would be nice to have some Indian summer weeks during summer.(Not the blistering hot days of Indian subcontinent)
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 7/1/2024 12:04:00 PM
Thank you for your comment. Moderate weather is what I like.
Date: 6/25/2024 6:48:00 PM
The sand that was enjoyable, now burns the soles of feet… until sweet August brings its fire into the game…I was so enjoying the bit of Atlanta Spring we had..waking up to low 60’s…opening the doors (with screens) for a few hours. Already it’s too hot for that. Hugs
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 6/25/2024 7:29:00 PM
Thank you for visiting my poem. Best wishes.
Date: 6/24/2024 9:55:00 PM
Excellent poem! I love all the months and how you fold the seasons one into the other! Brilliant!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 6/24/2024 10:31:00 PM
Thank you Karen. Seasons break the monotony.
Date: 6/23/2024 5:44:00 PM
Dear Hilda, you capture the heat of summer and it's gradual decline in fall with poetic finesse. I adore the vivid imagery and awesome rhymes. Great rhythm too! I love your poem and I love October, my favorite month. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 6/23/2024 8:44:00 PM
Thank you for you comment. I mind the heat more now than when I was younger.
Date: 6/23/2024 5:25:00 PM
Nice poem, taking us through summer, Hilda. July, August, September, my favorite months here by the beach!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 6/23/2024 8:42:00 PM
They can be nice months if one can get used to the heat. I'm glad you are near a beach. You probably get a cooling breeze.
Date: 6/23/2024 9:25:00 AM
Yes. October puts on the brakes but it's kind of cool when Indian summer appears at the end of October! Great idea for a poem on summer heat.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 6/23/2024 9:47:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 6/18/2024 2:12:00 AM
You go through the months of summer very cleverly. Her June is already hot. July and August will be terrible as far as heat is concerned. September is hot and humid but good for grape harvest. Would that October comes quickly. Lovely descriptive poem.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 6/18/2024 7:15:00 AM
Thank you. Ah, September, month of vino. Yes, each month has a gift. I have always enjoyed snow, so January is OK for me.
Date: 6/17/2024 9:06:00 PM
A beautiful poem on summer heat in lovely rhyming couplets, dear Hilda. With succeeding years the temperature rises to unprecedented levels. March and April are our hottest months. This year the heat has been unbearable during summer.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 6/17/2024 10:04:00 PM
I'm glad you liked the poem. It is either temperatures are rising, or my ability to withstand heat is dwindling, or both. Thank you for your comment.
Date: 6/17/2024 11:07:00 AM
Very well written and expressed, Hilda, and perfectly rhymed ... I'm not a fan of the stifling summer heat, either ... Looking forward to the coolness of fall :)
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 6/17/2024 3:36:00 PM
Thank you for your comments. Glad you stopped by.
Date: 6/17/2024 4:05:00 AM
Dear hilda so very well written this is! Its quite sunny here where im at. Altho yes rain comes unexpectedly. Your way with words always gives space for us readers to ponder and feel! Pleasure reading your work. It must be hot now where you are at! Sending you light always
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 6/17/2024 6:35:00 AM
Our weather is at the beginning of hot. The humidity is usually low. I'm never tied to opinions in poems. The next may be opposite. Lol. Thank you for reading. I love hearing from you.
Date: 6/16/2024 7:22:00 PM
Love that last couplet, Hilda. Here's to the application of the brakes! May it come in September this year. ~ Cool-weather-cucumber
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 6/16/2024 8:54:00 PM
It sounds like you've had enough hot weather already. I'm glad you liked the ending.
Date: 6/16/2024 2:25:00 AM
Lovely, all I can say is I love October!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 6/16/2024 7:58:00 AM
Thank you for your comment. I guess I chastised summer unfairly, but I wanted to write a different view of an otherwise fun time of year. Enjoying heat varies with the person. I also like October, perhaps because that is when I write my Halloween poems. Thank you for reading my efforts.
Date: 6/15/2024 9:14:00 AM
I enjoyed this wonderful write as each month plays its part, Very nicely done
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 6/15/2024 7:14:00 PM
Thank you. I hope your summer is mild.
Date: 6/14/2024 10:09:00 AM
Love this one, Hilda...especially "Carnival laughter shakes the air when July takes its turn." That makes me smile.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 6/14/2024 10:44:00 AM
Thank you for your compliment. I haven't been to a carnival in years. Maybe I'll try this year.
Date: 6/14/2024 8:27:00 AM
"And then along comes October, a time of leaves and rakes. Suddenly, the heat ends, when October applies the brakes." -- Thank God! Downed an entire glass of ice tea reading this one. Well done. Blessings.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 6/14/2024 10:39:00 AM
The ice tea sounds good. Thank you for your comments.
Date: 6/14/2024 7:54:00 AM
I enjoyed the beautiful melodic flow and rhyme of this piece, so well written. I am not a big fan of the sweltering heat of the summer, but do enjoy the arrival of Fall. Autumn is my favorite time of the year. Loved your poem, Well done
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 6/14/2024 10:37:00 AM
Thank you. Each season has a value; however, the sun has been causing me problems lately. I bought sunscreen, sunglasses, and masks, so I haven't been truly experiencing the outdoors.
Date: 6/13/2024 9:37:00 PM
Summer is wonderful season, but not during a heat wave! It's so nice that nature grants us the variety of seasons. Lovely poem!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 6/13/2024 9:47:00 PM
Thank you. I agree.
Date: 6/13/2024 5:24:00 PM
Hilda, you're amazing! I suppose we were both out in the scorching sun at the same time, today It was 90 degrees, and I almost lost control under the heat and sweat. I adore it when Autumn slows it down.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 6/13/2024 6:42:00 PM
It is hot here in the Utah desert. An electric pole went down little over an hour ago, so the house is hot too. It's good to hear from you. Stay cool.
Date: 6/13/2024 1:53:00 PM
Flowed very well, the rhyme is beautiful
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 6/13/2024 2:34:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 6/13/2024 1:30:00 PM
We’ve had horrible fires in BC Canada for several years. This one expressed the changes well.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 6/13/2024 1:45:00 PM
I wondered if someone has been setting those fires. We seem to have a few arsonists in the U.S. I remember hot summers as a child, but the ozone layer was still ok, and the sharp sun rays weren't as noticeable. If you could do time travel, you'd see the difference.
Date: 6/13/2024 1:22:00 PM
Oy, its been 105 where I live! Kds in CA start school in mid August. But all classrooms are air condtioned, then, they get a heap of days off year roung, inthe Midwest is totally different, I taught summer school once, wow,that washorrible. It stays hot past October. The trees are green all year. Orannge tree in backyard. But I am older. I do avoid the heat.. I don’t want to drop dead))) Pangie.. grandson was at Malibu for the past three days. Baseball at Perrerdine U, great poem,PR
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/22/2024 11:49:00 AM
He has not decided where he wants to go, amd Malibu had young men those days exhibiting their skills.and pkaying a game, he still has another year of school to complete. And they won’t be notifying him till way later.. my error! He has put in for other universities too. All across the country.. Thank you again, Pangie xx
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 6/13/2024 1:27:00 PM
Thank you. Congratulations to your grandson's acceptance in university baseball. I can't grow an orange tree outside, but I'm going to try t o grow one in the house.
Date: 6/13/2024 1:15:00 PM
- The summer is so different from country to country ... June has been as cold as winter this year 8-12 degrees ... we never lack rain ... - A wonderful poem that almost describes "my dream summer" ... I appreciates sunshine but not too hot :) - hugs
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/17/2024 6:45:00 PM
I watch Great Britain news now, it syre seem cold compared to CA, but then the uSa is so large, we vary from state to state. CA is so big it is never one temp equally every where. We vary from dessert to mountain. Tom C loves the USA pR
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 6/13/2024 1:23:00 PM
Thank you. I hope you have a wonderful summer and a happy year.
Date: 6/13/2024 10:55:00 AM
Wonderfully done, Hilda! I guess you were out in the same hot sun as I was just now. i love "when October applies the brakes."
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 6/13/2024 11:35:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by. It isn't July yet, but it is already hot.

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