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Hearts of Love On a Lake

Snow white swans on a lake Heads touching gently caressing Love unbounded bonded for life Heads touching forming a heart Heads touching gently caressing It was love at first sight Heads touching forming a heart Theirs is a love for a lifetime It was love at first sight Love unbounded bonded for life Theirs is a love for a lifetime Snow white swans on a lake

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Date: 8/6/2009 6:42:00 PM
there is a small lake in Wisconsin we (my Mom & me) go to in the fall, down along the bluffs near Fountain City....the Tundra Swans rest here on their journey south in the fall. this reminds me of that!!! beautiful poem! Sara! one of your finest!!! love, jim
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Date: 8/6/2009 3:18:00 PM
Lovely work...grrth
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Date: 8/6/2009 12:18:00 PM
A lovely pantoum poem....swans loving!!
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Date: 8/6/2009 9:44:00 AM
Sara, top of the class with this pantoum>>James
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Date: 8/6/2009 9:33:00 AM
This is a wonderful Pantoum hon - I just penned one of these but i think your's is much better - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 8/6/2009 9:16:00 AM
O great pantoum! well written in every part, wonderful poem.
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