Hearts of Love On a Lake

Snow white swans on a lake
Heads touching gently caressing
Love unbounded bonded for life
Heads touching forming a heart

Heads touching gently caressing
It was love at first sight
Heads touching forming a heart
Theirs is a love for a lifetime

It was love at first sight
Love unbounded bonded for life
Theirs is a love for a lifetime
Snow white swans on a lake
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Goff Avatar
August 6, 2009 at 6:42 PM
there is a small lake in Wisconsin we (my Mom & me) go to in the fall, down along the bluffs near Fountain City....the Tundra Swans rest here on their journey south in the fall. this reminds me of that!!! beautiful poem! Sara! one of your finest!!! love, jim
Heslop Avatar
August 6, 2009 at 3:18 PM
Lovely work...grrth
Richards Avatar
August 6, 2009 at 12:18 PM
A lovely pantoum poem....swans loving!!
Fraser Avatar
August 6, 2009 at 9:44 AM
Sara, top of the class with this pantoum>>James
Jordan Avatar
August 6, 2009 at 9:33 AM
This is a wonderful Pantoum hon - I just penned one of these but i think your's is much better - God Bless, MJ
Arteaga Avatar
August 6, 2009 at 9:16 AM
O great pantoum! well written in every part, wonderful poem.
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