Hearts From Heaven

“I carry your heart with me(I carry it in my heart)I am never without it"

                                                     Quote _ by E.E. Cummings


A heart of gold at pearly gates does meet
too soon, for those on earth, her savior Christ.
The shape of tears do spill at grieving feet
to wipe away the dross, not time’s great loss.

Her smile, her warmth, the miles she’d walk - her mom
had lived for nine decades - they’d thought, she’d too.
A drizzle of some gifted hearts, their balm,
does land on floor and pavement planes, like dew.

A pendant gem, cuz comes across at work
and leftovers of the big sale does toss
another heart from bag of tricks - network
of blessing’s bliss from heaven’s right hand Boss.

My uncle died and Aunt found coins - alloy.
She sends her girl, her boys these hearts. O joy!

9/23/2022
Contest: Writing Challenge- In My Heart- S Forms
Sponsor: Constance La France
Lost to heaven: Aunt 
Used Sonnet form, rhymezone, howmanysyllables
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kendrick Avatar
October 8, 2022 at 5:00 AM
I can feel the shock of the loss of this beloved aunt. It is good to see your memory penned on the winners' list. Congratulations. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
October 8, 2022 at 9:53 AM
It was a huge shock. She was young at heart, attended mass every morning, hiked, spent time with her kids. They expected to lose their dad, but not mom. Her brothers hurt for her loss. One is a few years younger but the other 3 older. God sent his angels.
La France Avatar
October 7, 2022 at 9:27 AM
Kim, a very nice Sonnet ad congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - In My Heart - "S" Forms, your Aunt sounds very special, Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
October 7, 2022 at 6:21 PM
Thank you, Constance! My uncle died a year before and her kids…we all thought she’d live into her nineties. But she died unexpectedly in her sleep at 75. She knew the Lord in a grand way and God took her home.
Baker Avatar
September 26, 2022 at 4:53 PM
Nice tribute to your Aunt, Kim. Good luck in the contest! Hugs, Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
October 7, 2022 at 6:22 PM
Thank you, Bill!
Buhagiar Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 9:18 AM
You have a knack of writing such beautiful verse. Best for a win. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 7, 2022 at 6:22 PM
Thank you, Victor!
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