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Hearts and Souls Entwine

As Dusk absorbs a darker hue, Ebony begins inking Night. And an owl bids daylight adieu, silhouetted against last light. Sweethearts hitch a ride to the moon, on the wings of a turtledove. And glowing like a gold doubloon, Luna smiles down upon our love. Our spirits rise above the Earth, untethered from their mortal perch. And discover love's actual worth lies in the finding, not the search. We kiss below a blushing Mars, letting our hearts and souls entwine. And a sky filled with twinkling stars forms a crown for my Valentine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/26/2018 7:27:00 PM
Love that last stanza, Emile.
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Date: 5/27/2018 8:00:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/24/2016 8:50:00 AM
Any time Emile...
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Date: 2/24/2016 7:20:00 AM
Congratulations on this cleverly written Quatrain! I enjoyed it.
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Date: 2/24/2016 8:49:00 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 2/23/2016 11:59:00 AM
Emile, congrats on your placement in the contest!-luloo *Smiles*
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Date: 2/24/2016 8:48:00 AM
Thanks Laura, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 2/23/2016 11:47:00 AM
Emile, Congratulations on your Entwined win... XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/24/2016 8:48:00 AM
Thanks LINDA, I appreciate your unwavering support. Emile.
Date: 2/23/2016 11:13:00 AM
Lovely poem Emile.
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Date: 2/24/2016 8:47:00 AM
Thanks James, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 2/23/2016 12:53:00 AM
nice entry that deserves a win and congrats, emile..huggs
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Date: 2/23/2016 9:00:00 AM
Thanks Nette, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 2/22/2016 10:41:00 PM
So very lovely Emile.. congrats on big win!
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Date: 2/23/2016 9:01:00 AM
Thanks Upma, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 2/8/2016 1:27:00 PM
Classic! I look forward to seeing this take top honors. A7+
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Date: 2/9/2016 8:50:00 AM
Thanks Daniel, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 2/8/2016 12:47:00 PM
How very beautiful!
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Date: 2/8/2016 12:58:00 PM
Thanks Anna, I appreciate your support. Emile.

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