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Heart-Less

I once had a bold Valentine
who took me out daily to dine
he fed me cold beans
and now in my dreams
I gas him for wasting my time!

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Carol Sunshine Brown

April 16, 2012 at 11:15 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Sidney~LeeAnn's "A Valentine Limerick" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Barbara Gorelick

April 15, 2012 at 7:11 PM

Oh those beans...lol....congrats BG

Cecilia Macfarlane

April 14, 2012 at 9:19 AM

Ha, ha...this was a blast to read....congrats on your win : )

Joann Grisetti

April 14, 2012 at 7:38 AM

You really made me laugh with this clever limerick. Congratulations.

Deborah Burch

April 14, 2012 at 6:40 AM

LMBO!!! Oh Debbie this is too funny!! You did awsome with this...meter and everything...I'm still laughing... :D :D Congratulations!! Got to fav it!! Big hugs--love deb

Joseph May

April 14, 2012 at 5:50 AM

congrats on your win Debbie

Poet Destroyer A

April 13, 2012 at 10:29 PM

DG~wow,,, this one is a late one... a super and wonderful congratulations.. with your valentine limerick * good night. :-) always~ PD

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 13, 2012 at 10:26 PM

congrats on another wonderful win Debbie ..luv..

Maxeen Dennis

January 31, 2012 at 9:15 PM

Funny, like it! I want to thank you, for your poetry because I am learning a lot about the different forms.

Don Johnson

January 20, 2012 at 4:59 PM

hot air is what i mist, syllables don't get as crisp, less yer hanging by hand of wrist, but the great fall from cliff is inviting:)

Lizanne Scholtz

January 20, 2012 at 4:47 PM

Lol, love it Debbie. Elizabeth

Joe Maverick

January 20, 2012 at 1:18 PM

I've sent soup mail, Debbie..!

Joe Maverick

January 20, 2012 at 12:55 PM

I must say if you don't mind i think this is one "blast of a write" Debbie, real fun piece..) the only danger from this type of write is there may be others who will try to "repeat its heated content" if they do..! we should all pour cold beans on them...! "ha ha"

Lucinda Cayton

January 20, 2012 at 8:35 AM

tin mcgraw song. living on em daily? hard to understand reasoning, love is love, take good care and God Bless you, Lucinda "Cindy" Lu Cayton author and joker