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Heartbroken Soul

 
Raise your words not your voice.  It is
rain that grows flowers, not thunder.

                                                 _Rumi

Death has filled me with dreadful fear,
and with each tragic loss-   I cried;
and write heartbroken with a tear,
to tombs my dream spirit will glide !
I am so lost;
my scarred soul tossed !

Despair-   my companion each year,
a family to love-  denied;
I write my pain for God to hear,
some days confused and terrified !
But, joyful peace;
in each penned piece !

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August 01, 2022


Poetry/Posie Rhyme/Heartbroken Soul
Copyright Protected, ID 08-1477-305-01
All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France

Emotions Used in Poem- fear, despair, love

Written for the Premiere contest, Strong Emotions
sponsor, Emile Pinet, Judged 08/30/2022

First Place

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James Inman Date: 9/4/2022 7:49:00 PM Heartbreaking and beautiful. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 9/4/2022 10:24:00 PM James, thank you so much for the visit and compliment, God Bless ~

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/31/2022 8:18:00 PM Wow Constance, congratulations on your Trophy win with this poignant piece! Blessings xxoo Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 9/1/2022 7:11:00 AM Connie thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment ~

Terry Miller Date: 8/31/2022 5:24:00 AM A very moving piece and a well-deserved first place, congratulations. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 9/1/2022 7:11:00 AM Terry, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations ~

Afzal Nusker Date: 8/30/2022 10:02:00 PM A moving piece of write as always. Congrats on your top win. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 9/1/2022 7:12:00 AM Afzal, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations ~

Valsa George Date: 8/30/2022 7:01:00 PM Emotions, never concocted, but flowing genuinely from the depth of your heart. Deeply touching .....Constance ! Congratulations on this outstanding trophy win out of the 100 entries....My Fav. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 9/1/2022 7:13:00 AM Valsa, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations ~

JCB Brul Date: 8/30/2022 6:21:00 PM CONGRATULATIONS on your trophy win with this exquisitely emotive write! This is brevity at its best!! Loved this!! A fav for me! ^__^JCB Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 9/1/2022 7:14:00 AM JCB, thank you so much for the congratulations, compliment and FAV, appreciate~

Sotto Poet Date: 8/30/2022 5:57:00 PM Constance, Congratulations on the win that you so richly deserved. You have written such a remarkable poem, which is not surprising coming from such a talented poetess as yourself. Sincere greetings and hugs, Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 9/1/2022 7:15:00 AM Sotto, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment on my poem and my writing, appreciate, hugs ~

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 8/30/2022 2:24:00 PM Back with big congrats for your top win Constance! Linda Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 9/1/2022 7:16:00 AM Linda, thank you so much for the congrats ~

Regina Mcintosh Date: 8/30/2022 1:06:00 PM Amazing write. Just love the imagery in spite of the pain lingering on the emotions. God bless you sweet lady. Love, Gina Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 8/30/2022 2:14:00 PM Gina, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and comment, blessings and love~

Emile Pinet Date: 8/30/2022 11:02:00 AM Congratulations Constance! Your amazing poem "Heartbroken Soul", has placed "First" in my contest. This contest garnered more entries than any of my previous contests (100) and your poem stood out amongst them all with its emotional impact. Very well done my friend. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 8/30/2022 2:15:00 PM Emile, thank you so much for the inspiration and contest and for my amazing placement, it must have been so difficult with 100 poems to judge, And for the compliment, comment and congratulations ~

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 8/3/2022 5:43:00 AM Perfect entry Constance. You have captured great emotions. GL in the contest! Linda Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 8/10/2022 3:43:00 PM Linda, thank you so much for the compliment and encouragement, blessings ~Constance