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Raise your words not your voice. It is rain that grows flowers, not thunder. _Rumi Death has filled me with dreadful fear, and with each tragic loss- I cried; and write heartbroken with a tear, to tombs my dream spirit will glide ! I am so lost; my scarred soul tossed ! Despair- my companion each year, a family to love- denied; I write my pain for God to hear, some days confused and terrified ! But, joyful peace; in each penned piece ! ___________________ August 01, 2022 Poetry/Posie Rhyme/Heartbroken Soul Copyright Protected, ID 08-1477-305-01 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Emotions Used in Poem- fear, despair, love Written for the Premiere contest, Strong Emotions sponsor, Emile Pinet, Judged 08/30/2022 First Place

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James Inman

Date: 9/4/2022 7:49:00 PM

Heartbreaking and beautiful.

Constance La France
Date: 9/4/2022 10:24:00 PM

James, thank you so much for the visit and compliment, God Bless ~

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/31/2022 8:18:00 PM

Wow Constance, congratulations on your Trophy win with this poignant piece! Blessings xxoo

Constance La France
Date: 9/1/2022 7:11:00 AM

Connie thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment ~

Terry Miller

Date: 8/31/2022 5:24:00 AM

A very moving piece and a well-deserved first place, congratulations.

Constance La France
Date: 9/1/2022 7:11:00 AM

Terry, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations ~

Afzal Nusker

Date: 8/30/2022 10:02:00 PM

A moving piece of write as always. Congrats on your top win.

Constance La France
Date: 9/1/2022 7:12:00 AM

Afzal, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations ~

Valsa George

Date: 8/30/2022 7:01:00 PM

Emotions, never concocted, but flowing genuinely from the depth of your heart. Deeply touching .....Constance ! Congratulations on this outstanding trophy win out of the 100 entries....My Fav.

Constance La France
Date: 9/1/2022 7:13:00 AM

Valsa, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations ~

Jcb Brul

Date: 8/30/2022 6:21:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS on your trophy win with this exquisitely emotive write! This is brevity at its best!! Loved this!! A fav for me! ^__^JCB

Constance La France
Date: 9/1/2022 7:14:00 AM

JCB, thank you so much for the congratulations, compliment and FAV, appreciate~

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/30/2022 5:57:00 PM

Constance, Congratulations on the win that you so richly deserved. You have written such a remarkable poem, which is not surprising coming from such a talented poetess as yourself. Sincere greetings and hugs,

Constance La France
Date: 9/1/2022 7:15:00 AM

Sotto, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment on my poem and my writing, appreciate, hugs ~

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/30/2022 2:24:00 PM

Back with big congrats for your top win Constance! Linda

Constance La France
Date: 9/1/2022 7:16:00 AM

Linda, thank you so much for the congrats ~

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/30/2022 1:06:00 PM

Amazing write. Just love the imagery in spite of the pain lingering on the emotions. God bless you sweet lady. Love, Gina

Constance La France
Date: 8/30/2022 2:14:00 PM

Gina, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and comment, blessings and love~

Emile Pinet

Date: 8/30/2022 11:02:00 AM

Congratulations Constance! Your amazing poem "Heartbroken Soul", has placed "First" in my contest. This contest garnered more entries than any of my previous contests (100) and your poem stood out amongst them all with its emotional impact. Very well done my friend.

Constance La France
Date: 8/30/2022 2:15:00 PM

Emile, thank you so much for the inspiration and contest and for my amazing placement, it must have been so difficult with 100 poems to judge, And for the compliment, comment and congratulations ~

Bill Baker

Date: 8/8/2022 4:23:00 PM

Thank God for your gift of poety. It is your comforter. Well written poem with strong emotions, should do well in the contest, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Constance La France
Date: 8/10/2022 3:42:00 PM

Bill, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and encouragement, blessings ~Constance

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/3/2022 5:43:00 AM

Perfect entry Constance. You have captured great emotions. GL in the contest! Linda

Constance La France
Date: 8/10/2022 3:43:00 PM

Linda, thank you so much for the compliment and encouragement, blessings ~Constance