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contest Halcyon, Heartbroken, House words poetry

sponsor Constance La France

Sad, heartbroken, I feel tears on my face this face of Rue held in my hands wet palms audible sobs fill a forsaken space in my mind are the thoughts of empty arms no one hears the deep moans of my despair in a crumbled realm that has begun to fade to leave my emotions in disrepair from the cold sharp edge of my lover's blade thoughts of tomorrow are dreams of a fool that cry as my memories turn hollow and passion pours into a stagnant pool drop by drop to release all my sorrow a deep sadness comes from her cold goodbye my soul bathe in tears that fall from my eye

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Date: 10/20/2023 12:54:00 PM
Frederic, excellent writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, Constance
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Date: 10/14/2023 2:05:00 PM
Many congratulations Frederic on your very worthy win with this very emotional sonnet. So well written, heart rendering. Flows perfectly. The ending couplet, in particular, is very profound. Loved it. Thank you again. Blessings to you.
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Date: 10/13/2023 7:13:00 AM
Great sad heartfelt Sonnet, Frederic. Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest. Eve
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Date: 10/12/2023 2:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Heartbroken" is a wonderful yet sad write. Have a blessed day writing away.....................
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Date: 10/5/2023 12:41:00 PM
- "audible sobs fill a forsaken space" ... heartbreaking cry ... sad but beautifully written, Frederic - Best wishes in the contest (I chose the same theme) - hugs
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