Heartbreakers

Can you hear the soul of it, the silky sound that haunts your mind?
And takes you to a film noir with words that cry of pining hearts?…
Of love betrayed, or kisses spurned, returning to a shaded past
Notes that echo through the night, with salty tears that will not hide
The sultry voice that sings the blues will walk you through the foggy mist
And break your heart with bitterness

Somewhere, there’s a lonely song, about the man who got away
She drinks the words as if alone, dressed in satin, red lips croon
Who does she sing to?   Who are those strangers in the room?
The scent of whiskey in the gloom, they drink it straight, in black and gray
The music fills the void with tunes, it rises above the grim despair
It mingles with the nicotine, that circles in the midnight air 
Somewhere is a saxophone, and a sobbing clarinet 

She’s tearing words from limb to limb
The room is dim…but it’s not for them
The smokey sounds that fill the air
Shots of whiskey....another pair
Heads held low, hidden faces
A place where troubled souls
Find words in old songs
To tell their stories
About deep sorrows
About deep regret
Doesn't matter if anyone is listening
It's just enough to have them sung
Even long after the tears had dried
After they leave this place
All alone in some lonely space
Haunting melody inside a pounding head
Someone still cries
The blues in the night


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In Honor of Michael Falotico's Contest "A Cry Still Heard"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/19/2011 6:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Kristen Bruni's contest "Soul Tunes" Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2011 6:03:00 AM
Wow!!! you capture and re-create the very essence of the blues with this sensational piece Carrie. Congrats on your so well-deserved FIRST PLACE WIN, Lainie
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Date: 4/17/2011 1:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your huge win-Ist Place - in this amazing contest, Carrie. Love, Annalise
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Date: 4/17/2011 8:50:00 AM
Wow we toolove ballads & TORCH singers, great win. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 4/17/2011 7:18:00 AM
Somewhere in the depths of the mind an endless loop wails....excellent....thanks
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Date: 4/16/2011 6:07:00 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Carrie
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Date: 4/16/2011 4:44:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your first place win in Soul Tunes contest.. enjoy another wondderful win with luv..
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Date: 4/16/2011 3:40:00 PM
Well you really puilled this one right out of the movie scene. Great work Carrie and congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/12/2011 5:24:00 PM
beautiful flow of the sentiments and ecstacy, Carrie
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Date: 4/12/2011 5:17:00 PM
Wonderful entry, Carrie. I kept thinking of Billie Holliday as I read about this blues singer with the "sultry" voice. Best wishes in Kristen's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/12/2011 4:18:00 PM
a great one for all the soul train people, a great write. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/12/2011 7:32:00 AM
Another to the winners circle Carrie. The best to you in the contest and always. Love, Carol
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