Heartbreak Hotel R B

I was speared by a Cupid star gazer
More likely the devil's hell-raiser !
With much mischief, his darts,
like his poems, would impart
a wit that's as sharp as a razor !

It's time for his shame to repent !
The Soup wants to charge you some rent
Your arrow and name,
that flared with hot flames,
died out, and I'm here to lament !

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For Skat's Contest: "Heartbreaking Poet"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/30/2015 4:58:00 AM
Congrats on your win..A very well written one..Sara
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Date: 5/27/2015 10:12:00 PM
who is it? who is it? I liked Robert Johnson's guess!! Congrats, Carrie.
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Date: 5/27/2015 9:35:00 PM
R B, My only guess is Rude Bastard. Great limerick Carrie. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 5/27/2015 5:16:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/27/2015 1:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your podium win, Carrie! I still can't make out who RB is! // paul
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Date: 5/27/2015 11:19:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Carrie:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/27/2015 10:03:00 AM
Carrie, that was deep, Congratulations, thanks for the contest support. Hugs SKAT
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Date: 2/7/2015 9:27:00 PM
oh my, I am so bad at guessing the names to go with these initials. Soup me who it is!!! Good way to do it too. I have one to post but am holding off.
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Date: 2/4/2015 6:52:00 PM
Very nice pen Carrie! It made me smile! GL in the contest! A 7 from me! :) Love n hugs! xxx D.
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Date: 2/4/2015 6:36:00 PM
Very amusing Carrie - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xxx
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