Carrie Richards Poet Limerick

Heartbreak Hotel R B

I was speared by a Cupid star gazer
More likely the devil's hell-raiser !
With much mischief, his darts,
like his poems, would impart
a wit that's as sharp as a razor !

It's time for his shame to repent !
The Soup wants to charge you some rent
Your arrow and name,
that flared with hot flames,
died out, and I'm here to lament !

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For Skat's Contest: "Heartbreaking Poet"

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Sara Kendrick May 30, 2015 at 4:58 AM Congrats on your win..A very well written one..Sara

Andrea Dietrich May 27, 2015 at 10:12 PM who is it? who is it? I liked Robert Johnson's guess!! Congrats, Carrie.

Robert Johnson May 27, 2015 at 9:35 PM R B, My only guess is Rude Bastard. Great limerick Carrie. Congrats on your placement.

Poet Destroyer A May 27, 2015 at 5:16 PM Carrie, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Paul Callus May 27, 2015 at 1:02 PM Congratulations on your podium win, Carrie! I still can't make out who RB is! // paul

Jan Allison May 27, 2015 at 11:19 AM Dropping back with my congrats Carrie:-) Hugs jan xx

Skat A May 27, 2015 at 10:03 AM Carrie, that was deep, Congratulations, thanks for the contest support. Hugs SKAT

Andrea Dietrich February 7, 2015 at 9:27 PM oh my, I am so bad at guessing the names to go with these initials. Soup me who it is!!! Good way to do it too. I have one to post but am holding off.

Dorian Petersen Potter February 4, 2015 at 6:52 PM Very nice pen Carrie! It made me smile! GL in the contest! A 7 from me! :) Love n hugs! xxx D.

Jan Allison February 4, 2015 at 6:36 PM Very amusing Carrie - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xxx