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Heartbreak and Loss

These scars on my soul are beautiful and painful, Deep gashes that cannot be seen except in my eyes; The sorrow I keep within me is dreadful, My short life has been full of death and whys. Deep gashes that cannot be seen except in my eyes, I thought the passage of time would heal the scars; My short life has been full of death and whys, At night all my beloved are the sparkling stars. I thought the passage of time would heal the scars, I take two white roses to the tomb of my babies; At night my beloved are the sparkling stars, My forever grief is full of long past sweet reveries. I take two white roses to the tomb of my babies, Weeping I touch all the names engraved in stone; My forever grief is full of long past reveries, Within my soul the forever sorrow still moans. Weeping I touch all the names engraved in stone, Yet from this pain something beautiful was to be; Within my soul the forever sorrows still moan, And I write from a scarred soul my sad poetry. Yet from this pain something beautiful was to be, The sorrow I keep within me is dreadful; And I write from a scarred soul my poetry, These scars on my soul are beautiful and painful. _________________________ November 17, 2015 Submitted to the contest, Chose A Topic sponsor, Russell Sivey Topic Chosen: D, Heartbreak and Loss(old/new poem)

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Date: 11/10/2017 6:45:00 PM
I cry for you! Your poems are full of depth and sadness - and beauty.
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Date: 11/10/2017 11:29:00 AM
To expose such a beautiful soul to the world, though covered with the scars that will forever bleed and from this bleeding reveal the depth and breadth of its burdens is extremely powerful in its showing of strength
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Date: 11/10/2017 10:54:00 AM
Excellent pantoum Broken Wings and the proof how writing can help us survive such deep scars. Very well expressed. Beautiful ! :)
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