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Heartbreak

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Heartbreak

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                                   L  o  n  e  l  y                        
                     
                Tears                                    Pain
              
             Sobbing                                    break
            
          Chest                                           heart
     
      Ache
  
     Heart
 
     Changes                ____
  
   Physical                       \

    Evidence                        ____
     
      Of                                      \
       
        A                                         ____
  
         Broken                                    \

           Heart                                        __

              Seen                                            \

                    On

                        Echocardiogram

                              Takotsubo
                                               
                                      C a r d i o m y o p a t h y

                                                                        Lover's death

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Date: 9/20/2016 1:31:00 AM
I understand the pain and the depression that kills,but I like to be leave that the heart rather than breaking,deepens with experience and increases it's potential to love and be loved.
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Date: 9/20/2016 6:17:00 AM
Michael, it is a fact that some people do actually have physical proof that their heart it breaking and some do die from it believe it or not..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
Date: 9/15/2016 5:11:00 PM
wow what a creative poem - I have heard of people dying from a broken heart especially the elderly who cannot cope without their lifelong partner:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/16/2016 4:26:00 PM
Thanks for the lovely comment..Now you know that a broken heart is a true happening..Most people heal in a couple of weeks but for some it is the end..Sara
Date: 9/7/2016 4:15:00 AM
- I agree with the comments by Daniel - As a nurse I have experienced it many times .... they die of grief - A great poem, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/6/2016 8:22:00 PM
It's not that hard to believe. You always hear of one spouse dying, after many years of marriage, and the other dying soon thereafter. People will say, they died of a broken heart. I did enjoy the creativity and am always fascinated by science:)
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Date: 9/6/2016 8:13:00 PM
Enjoyed what you bible with this one.
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Date: 9/6/2016 7:55:00 PM
Well done! Great creativity, Sara ... CayCay
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Date: 9/6/2016 5:32:00 PM
I was reading some items on the internet one day and found an article about how that heartbreak can actually kill a person but usually it is short lived and most recover but it is a real thing..Start reading with the word heart and go backwards and down..Sara
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