Heartbreak

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i wrote this sometime back on a feeling

A thousand and one reasons we sometimes seek answers How did thanks turn to such bitterness inflicting pain Upsetting beyond all words Good returned with bad will Only a coward hides behind someone else's face Using them as a weapon The knife to cut deeply wounds on someone else's behalf Twisting good using others as your tool To inflict hurt on your word I understand hate perfectly But do not expect me To stoop unto your low level Unnecessary drama over nothing No good comes out of hurting someone who is kind For they will be sorry for the person you have become it hurts a lot in the heartbeat truly in the end hope will find peace

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/25/2016 3:22:00 PM

Hi Liam!This is a very sad, profound and heartbreaking poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.So deeply sad n' heartfelt and I can feel your pain all the way in this piece here too.All so very beautifully written in all its sadness and it makes me so very sad and it breaks my own heart in pieces just thinking of anyone hurting you in any way in the past, present or at any time Liam.Just praying here now that you're really okay today and that no one has hurt you again in any way or form recently. Excellent piece!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're really okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you here in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too.Wishing you a very peaceful n' lovely week ahead!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Jan Allison

Date: 2/25/2016 2:42:00 PM

Very deep and sad - I think some people must get some sort of pleasure out of hurting other's Liam:-( hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/25/2016 2:04:00 PM

- Heartbreaking and deeply write, dear friend Liam - (I do not understand hate ...... hate, is a very "strong" word .... I refuse to use the word) - "No good comes out of hurting" !!!!! - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)