Heartbreak

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i wrote this sometime back on a feeling

A thousand and one reasons 
we sometimes seek answers
How did thanks turn
to such bitterness inflicting pain 
Upsetting beyond all words 
Good returned with bad will 
Only a coward hides 
behind someone else's face 
Using them as a weapon 
The knife 
to cut deeply wounds 
on someone else's behalf 
Twisting good 
using others as your tool 
To inflict hurt on your word 
I understand hate perfectly 
But do not expect me 
To stoop unto your low level 
Unnecessary drama over nothing 
No good comes out of hurting 
someone who is kind 
For they will be sorry 
for the person you have become 
it hurts a lot in the heartbeat
truly in the end
hope will find peace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/25/2016 3:22:00 PM
Hi Liam!This is a very sad, profound and heartbreaking poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.So deeply sad n' heartfelt and I can feel your pain all the way in this piece here too.All so very beautifully written in all its sadness and it makes me so very sad and it breaks my own heart in pieces just thinking of anyone hurting you in any way in the past, present or at any time Liam.Just praying here now that you're really okay today and that no one has hurt you again in any way or form recently. Excellent piece!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're really okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you here in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too.Wishing you a very peaceful n' lovely week ahead!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 2/25/2016 2:42:00 PM
Very deep and sad - I think some people must get some sort of pleasure out of hurting other's Liam:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/25/2016 2:04:00 PM
- Heartbreaking and deeply write, dear friend Liam - (I do not understand hate ...... hate, is a very "strong" word .... I refuse to use the word) - "No good comes out of hurting" !!!!! - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)
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