Heartbeats Trembling

whiff of life left leaves trembling, silk rosebuds unfurl excel with beauty 2/5/2018

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Susan Ashley

Date: 2/10/2018 9:15:00 PM

Superb and delicate imagery Eve.. Warmest wishes. ~Susan

Eric Boddie

Date: 2/8/2018 6:26:00 PM

every time the rose....finds the presence of a nose....its virtue just grows....to unwithstandable i suppose....i mean it gets some out their clothes....leaving all secrets exposed....is that really the Life that you chose....why Love the path where deception flows....very powerful mrs roper....;)

Joseph May

Date: 2/8/2018 6:36:00 AM

Great haiku Eve

Supraja Kannan

Date: 2/6/2018 11:47:00 PM

Beautiful imagery... Well done...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/6/2018 2:00:00 PM

- Aww .. beautiful written, Eve - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 2/6/2018 6:05:00 AM

Simply stunning imagery...

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/6/2018 12:36:00 AM

Simply beautiful Eve!!! hugs!

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/5/2018 10:59:00 PM

Eve, I love your poem. It reminds me of my dying father taking his last breath. To me, it reads like a lovely subtle whisper of a last breath taken by someone ready to die peacefully after a long happy life.