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Heartbeat

This pen
may never
capture Love's
essence
as beautifully
as the rhythm
of her heartbeat...

beautyheartlovepoetryfree verse

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Muhammad Imtiaz

Date: 3/12/2018 4:20:00 AM

You described great thing in a nutshell.............it is deep and meaningful.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 1/31/2018 3:31:00 AM

Good, cute (no offence) simple and thus profound. Lots of wishes, Kai

Charlie Smith
Date: 1/31/2018 10:35:00 AM

Thank you Kai.

Francis J Grasso

Date: 11/28/2017 6:24:00 PM

Very sweet. Beautifully expressed Charlie! ...Fran

Charlie Smith
Date: 11/30/2017 8:24:00 AM

Thank you Francis...

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/17/2017 9:09:00 AM

Short, sweet and so beautifully powerful. Now my friend, that clearly takes great and tremendously inspired poetic talent!

Charlie Smith
Date: 11/21/2017 1:26:00 PM

Thank you so much for the encouragement Robert, it means a great deal coming fro you...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2017 1:01:00 AM

So beautiful, Charlie.

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/27/2017 9:01:00 AM

Thank you Andrea.

Lynn Marie

Date: 9/15/2017 11:34:00 PM

every word you write is why we continue on. Beautiful Charlie xo a fave

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/16/2017 7:42:00 AM

Thank you Lynn, your encouragement keeps the ink flowing.

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/13/2017 12:09:00 PM

Lovely ... Beautiful brevity ... I doubt if I can write like this powerfully ... Thank you for liking my She Falls In Love ...

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/13/2017 8:13:00 PM

Thank you for your kindness Probir, I do so appreciate it...

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/9/2017 2:56:00 PM

Ohhh how romantically lovely Charlie. How sweet, tender and loving. I just love your poem. Thank you for sharing. Have a great Saturday:)

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/12/2017 11:06:00 AM

Thank you Susan.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/9/2017 10:36:00 AM

ohh, this makes me drool, charlie...very fine work.. huggs

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/10/2017 10:39:00 PM

Didn't mean to do that Nette, thanks...

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/8/2017 11:14:00 PM

It may not but it sure comes a close second! Very Romantic poem!

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/8/2017 11:20:00 PM

You are too kind Arthur.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/8/2017 5:48:00 PM

Well said, quite lovely Charlie!

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/8/2017 11:18:00 PM

Thank you Vijay.

Lin Lane

Date: 9/8/2017 1:59:00 PM

Oh, Charlie. You're a romantic at heart. Hearing and feeling the heartbeat of the one you love is very intimate.

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/8/2017 11:17:00 PM

For sure. Thank you Lin...

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/8/2017 1:26:00 PM

Very nice Charlie! :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/8/2017 11:16:00 PM

Thank you Heidi.

Tim Smith

Date: 9/8/2017 12:34:00 PM

Very romantic Charlie...loving the pic too

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/8/2017 1:05:00 PM

Thank you Tim.

Heartbeat

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