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Heartbeat

This pen may never capture Love's essence as beautifully as the rhythm of her heartbeat...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Imtiaz Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 4:20 AM
You described great thing in a nutshell.............it is deep and meaningful.
Neumann Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 3:31 AM
Good, cute (no offence) simple and thus profound. Lots of wishes, Kai
Smith Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 10:35 AM
Thank you Kai.
Grasso Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 6:24 PM
Very sweet. Beautifully expressed Charlie! ...Fran
Smith Avatar
November 30, 2017 at 8:24 AM
Thank you Francis...
Lindley Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 9:09 AM
Short, sweet and so beautifully powerful. Now my friend, that clearly takes great and tremendously inspired poetic talent!
Smith Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 1:26 PM
Thank you so much for the encouragement Robert, it means a great deal coming fro you...
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 1:01 AM
So beautiful, Charlie.
Smith Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 9:01 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Marie Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 11:34 PM
every word you write is why we continue on. Beautiful Charlie xo a fave
Smith Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 7:42 AM
Thank you Lynn, your encouragement keeps the ink flowing.
Gupta Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 12:09 PM
Lovely ... Beautiful brevity ... I doubt if I can write like this powerfully ... Thank you for liking my She Falls In Love ...
Smith Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 8:13 PM
Thank you for your kindness Probir, I do so appreciate it...
Ashley Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 2:56 PM
Ohhh how romantically lovely Charlie. How sweet, tender and loving. I just love your poem. Thank you for sharing. Have a great Saturday:)
Smith Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 11:06 AM
Thank you Susan.
Onclaud Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 10:36 AM
ohh, this makes me drool, charlie...very fine work.. huggs
Smith Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 10:39 PM
Didn't mean to do that Nette, thanks...
Vaso Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 11:14 PM
It may not but it sure comes a close second! Very Romantic poem!
Smith Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 11:20 PM
You are too kind Arthur.
Pandit Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 5:48 PM
Well said, quite lovely Charlie!
Smith Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 11:18 PM
Thank you Vijay.
Lane Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 1:59 PM
Oh, Charlie. You're a romantic at heart. Hearing and feeling the heartbeat of the one you love is very intimate.
Smith Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 11:17 PM
For sure. Thank you Lin...
Sands Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 1:26 PM
Very nice Charlie! :)
Smith Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 11:16 PM
Thank you Heidi.
Smith Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 12:34 PM
Very romantic Charlie...loving the pic too
Smith Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 1:05 PM
Thank you Tim.
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