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Heartbeat

Broken heart hides lost love in debris, unsure if longing lyric would ever resonate with resurrected heartbeat.

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Date: 5/8/2025 4:34:00 AM
Dear SSR, very well written for the prompt, i love the slight alliterations and how your words flow here as how youv written "lost love in debris" and "resurrected heartbeat" thank you for sharing! Congratulations on your win! Sending you light.
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Date: 5/8/2025 1:44:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great micro poem: Heartbeat :) - hugs
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/8/2025 2:10:00 AM
Thank you so much for your encouraging comments.

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